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The Script

Postby Alamo John UK on Sun Sep 28, 2008 4:08 pm

Before the demise of the film site I spent a couple of weeks trying to get as many goodies as possible copied to file before it vanished forever, amongst other things I managed to grab was the following, originally posted by Gambler in 2005, it makes for great reading and acts as a useful reference guide to the entire script of the Alamo 1960.

I will give you the entire post as it details the amount of work that went into translating and typing the whole thing, which in itself must have been a painstaking labour of love by the person involved.

I will also break it down to 3 seperate posts for easier reading, as it's a little on the long side to take it all in in one hit.

Hope you enjoy it as much as I did

PS: There are 1 or 2 grammatical errors but what the heck !
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Gambler wrote.

I would like to bring to your attention the initiative of an other french waynamo buff named Michel Drujon.
I let him present his projetc in his own words :

"Howdy!
I recently purchased a chinese DVD of Waynamo's Director's cut, and it works fine, except that when sergeant Lightfoot says : "Seventy one cold, windy, rump-bumpin' miles since yesterday", the "English" subtitle reads : "Send them one call and thet all go wild... suggested !" ; "Words are dusty" becomes "Where's your destiny ?" ; "can't they ?", "a cake day" ; "this oblique rampart", "this will-be grand-Pa", etc... And as fun as it may seem to english-speaking people, as a Frenchman not especially fluent in English, I'd rather know what the characters really say.
I thus pasted the 2400 subtitles in WinWord, through Subrip, in order to correct those little inaccuracies, referring to the official MGM DVD in which English subtitles seem about reliable (except that of course, they skip some of the text when it's longer than the screen : Neill's advice to Smitty to have "some frijole beans" becomes "some beans", and I spend two days wondering what those "free holy beans" may be...) ; and, for the edited scenes, to the Director's cut 1995 VHS, French edition. But after about 100 hours of work, headphones on my ears, it's probably still loaded with mistakes (does really Davy say to Travis "Light here while I bed down this buck" in the cantina scene? I hear something like bus, or baz, whereas later, speaking to that young doe, he pronounces "old buck" alright ; does Beekeeper tell Thimblerig: "I reckon Davy's got us in a hollow log with a bear still in it?" : I hear "laugh" and "bar", but it doesn't mean a thing, does it? ; & what does this Fanatic talk about, the last night, when he claims : "I'll have you to know that I'm a fully immersed member of the first church of King's Crossing. Don't come on beein' King's creek cause the Jordan wasn' nearby"???…)
So, on finding out the "Alamo Mo's Waynamo " topic each time I typed a phrase in Google to check if it was English or Chinese, I figured that some of these Waynamo buffs may have fun reading over my transcription, and with everybody providing corrections & additions, we could in the end get a screenplay we could print for personnal use, as it seems that it has never been published.
Greetings for France, MD."
THE ALAMO

[Uncut version : Overture – Over an artwork of the Alamo chapel, orchestral introduction to the main themes in summary form : Ballad of the Alamo, Green Leaves of Summer, Tennessee Babe, Here’s to the Ladies, Ballad coda.]

Main title : Over credits paintings, Mexican trumpet plays Degüello (“throat-cutting”) Tiomkin’s arrangement of the Spanish call signifying “no quarter to the losers” . Then homely accordion plays the Green Leaves of Summer.

In the year of our Lord, 1836, Texas,
which has known many flags,
was then under the colours of Mexico.
Though its inhabitants were made up
of settlers from far countries and all
parts of the United States, they were
Mexican citizens all.

Generalissimo Santa Anna was
sweeping north across Mexico toward
them, crushing all who opposed his
tyrannical rule. They now faced the
decision that all men in all times must
face… the eternal choice of men…
to endure oppression or to resist.
[Music : Ballad of the Alamo theme is introduced.]


(Texians headquarters in San Antonio de Bexar)
William B. Travis : General Houston’s arrived, gentlemen.
Dr Sutherland : Refreshments ?
Travis : Thank you, Doc.
Sgt Lightfoot : Seventy-one cold, windy, rump-bumpin’ miles, since yesterday !
Doctor : You wouldn’t have it any other way, Lightfoot.

(Outside - Houston’s arrival.)
— Company, Halt !… Company, stand to !
[Music : Ballad of the Alamo is played rhythmically, by trumpet (Mexico) and accordion (Texas) alternately.]

(Inside)
Sentry : Atten-tion !
Gal Houston : That is well. Don Esparza !
Don Esparza : General…
Col. Neill : Do pardon, General Houston, may I order the men to bivouac ? These last two forced marches rather took it out of them.
Houston : Foot soldiers may. Feed the others. Care for their horses. And tell them there’ll be another forced march within the hour.
Neill : Yes, Sir. Sergeant… (Yes sir !) come with me !
Houston : Doctor…
Dr Sutherland : Sam…
Houston : Dickinson…
Almeron Dickinson : General, sir.
Lightfoot : General, it ain’t none of my business, but you’ve ain’t et since yesterday. I’ll set it on the table here.
Houston : Where’s Jim Bowie ?
Lightfoot : When certain people ain’t et, they’re meaner ‘n a bobcat.
Houston : Mr. Dickinson, I asked you a question. Where is Jim Bowie ?
Lieut. Bonham : He’s indisposed, sir.
Houston: Indisposed ? By God, if you mean drunk, you say drunk, sir.
Bonham : He’s drunk, sir.
Houston : What’s your name?
Bonham : James Butler Bonham, in Travis’s command, sir.
Houston, eating : Hm… Neill, you go north with me. Colonel Travis will be in command here.
Travis : Major, Sir.
Houston : Colonel Travis. I’ll send the commission through.
Travis : Thank you, General. Let me assure you that I’ll do everything in my…
Houston : We can dispense with the amenities, Colonel. Now ! I’ve been given command of the armies of Texas. But the fly in the buttermilk is there ain’t no armies in Texas. ‘Few good friends ; some willing men… I’m gonn’ have to knock some of those men into an army — and to do that, I need time. You people, you people right here on the real ground, are going to have to buy me that time. You’re gonna have to keep Santa Anna off the back of my neck until I can get in shape to fight him.
Travis : General, I assume you’re ordering me to…
Houston : Dammit ! I’m ordering you to command. How and what you do is your problem.
Neill : But Sam, what about Jim Bowie ?
Houston : Jim Bowie, as Mr. Bonham has informed us, is indisposed !
Neil : Yes, sir. But I’d like to point out, sir, that Jim Bowie is leading a hundred volunteers, whereas young Travis here commands less than thirty regulars.
Travis : Twenty-seven. General Houston, I think we oughta discuss this matter…
Houston : Clear the room !… Gentlemen, I would have a word with Mr. Travis, if you’ll excuse us. (To the Tejanos Smile Con permiso… Mr. Travis, were you going to complain to me about Jim Bowie ?
Travis : Not complain, Sir.
Houston : Of course, Jim Bowie’s drunk. He took this town from General Cós, he fought a battle, and now he is drunk. Seems kinda natural to me. Or perhaps you question something other than Bowie’s drinking ? ‘You gonna tell me that he’s got a lot of acreage around here ? ‘He’s married into the Mexican aristocracy ?
Travis : Yes, Sir.
Houston : Mr. Travis, I would trust Jim Bowie with my life. More than that, I would trust him with the lives of my family. And more than that, I would trust him with the life of Texas.
Travis : Sir…
Houston : That’s all, Travis.
[Music : Ballad coda.]
Travis : Yes, sir.
Houston : Travis, I’ve never been able to like you. But you are another one of the very few men I would trust with the life of Texas.
Travis : For that, thank you, Sir.
Houston : And it may very well be… that that life rests in your hands now.
[Music : The eyes of Texas are upon you.]
(Outside)
Houston : Jethro ! Is that you ?
Jethro : Yes, Sir, General, this is me.
Houston : How does it happen you’re still alive ? You had white hair when I was a little boy, and now we look like we’re about the same age.
Jethro : Yes, Sir. But I’ve been a temperate and God fearing man all my life, Sir.
Houston : Well, I guess my past is out !… Now Jethro, you tell your Mister Jim I’m sorry to hear about his illness, I wish him a speedy recovery, and assure him of my undying affection.
Jethro : Yes, Sir. And General Sam, Sir, he love’ you too, and them words of yours gon’ put him right back on his feet. He got a colic, you know.
Houston : I heard.
Jethro : Oh, in the stomach.
Houston : Stay temperate, old man !… Neill !
Neill : Column right ! Forward ! Yo-ho !
[Music : Ballad of the Alamo]
Travis’ man : Take care, men !

(Jim Bowie’s room. He’s sleeping on his belly, a jug near his hand.)
Jethro, as Bowie painfully wakes up : You all right, Mister Jim ?
Bowie : Yeah… Sit down, Jeth. Ow…
Jethro : Can I get you something, sir ?
Bowie : Oh, no, no. You just sit there… (At the door Smile Houston’s gone ?
Jethro : Yes, sir.
Bowie : Come and gone, and me laying drunk !…
[Uncut version : 00:10:47
Jethro : Well, your stomach, Mr. Jim. That ain’t good, what not. Every man is sick out of something…
Bowie : I’ve never been sick a day in my life, Jeth, and you know it.
Jethro : More kind of sickness than bellyache ; heartache, too. I’m kind of glad I’m so awfull’ old, Mr. Jim. You know that ?
Bowie : What’s that ?
Jethro : Well, because it seems like there’s things, I’ll be glad to be gone from. Things a man’s got to face these days. Your family so far away, not being able to see’em and be with them. This fair land all torn by war… I tell you, it’s just more than an old man can take.
Bowie : You’re right, Jeth. (Empties jug on the floor)
Jethro : Well, Jim Bowie, what in the world are you doing ?
Bowie : No help for me to be drunk.
Jethro : Don’t torture yourself no more, Mister Jim, please !

(Outside)
Travis : Colonel Bowie !
Dickinson : Hey, Jim.
Bowie : Hey.
Travis : The General was most concerned about your absence — your illness.
Bowie : I’m sorry about that, Major.
Travis : Colonel. The General was kind enough to endorse my rank.
Bowie : I see…
Travis : And I suppose you’re aware he did me the honor of putting me in the command.
Bowie : Now that you tell me, I’m aware.
Travis : We will assemble at the ruined mission tomorrow morning. You will bring your men there.
Bowie : I won’t deny this ain’t hard for me to say : yes, sir.
Bowie’s man : Hi, Jim. What do we do now?
Bowie : You’ll get the word.
Travis : Lieutenant Bonham !
Bonham : Yes, sir.
Travis : Carry out your orders.
Bonham : Yes sir, Colonel.
Travis : Good luck, Jim.]
(Ramparts of the Alamo)
Dickinson : Colonel Travis ! Bowie’s approaching.
Sentry : Halt !
Travis, from the roof of the chapel : Carry on, sentry. (To Dickinson Smile Recall work parties. Prepare for flag ceremony !
Dickinson : Detail ! Forward, march ! (Drumming around the flagpole mound) Present… arms ! (Bugle) Order… arms ! (Flag of 1824 federalist constitution is lifted.)
Travis : We stand here ready to do our duty and cognizant of the will of God. Captain Dickinson ! Dismiss the ceremony. Oh, and Captain, you will inform the men that work details will be dismissed at four thirty in order that family men may gather their dependants within these walls.
Dickinson : Yes, sir !
Travis : Lieutenant Blake !
Blake : Yes, sir.
Travis : You will see to the quartering of Bowie’s volunteers.
Blake : Yes, sir ! You men will follow me !
Bowie : Jeth !
Jethro : Yes, sir.
Bowie : Blake will show you to our quarters, set’em up.
Jethro : Yes, sir.
(Bowie walks towards the church)
(In the chapel. Bowie looks at the fallen roof.)
Travis, coming down the ladder : Colonel Bowie…
Bowie : Santa Anna’s got an army of seven thousand men.
[Music : Degüello.]
Travis : So ?
Bowie : Well, you ain’t gonna try to defend this broken down church against seven-thousand battle-hard troops ?
Travis : Colonel Bowie, you were drunk at the last officers’ call. And I would rather postpone our discussion until the next. At which time, I will explain my plans and give orders for the implementing of those plans.
[Music : The Eyes of Texas.]

(In the yard. Men are building a palisade between chapel & south wall. )
Bowie’s man : Hey Jim ! Why do we have to work like this ? I volunteered to fight, not to build no fort. How come we have to work like this ?
Bowie : ‘Cause old Sam told Travis, Travis told me, and I’m tellin’ you.
(Bell rings)
Sentry : Somebody’s comin’ hell-bent for leather, sinking spurs at every jump !… Halt ! Right there ! Corporal of guard, post number one !
Dickinson : No civilians may enter the fort, señor Seguin. I’m sorry.
Bowie : Juan, Silverio !
Seguin : Amigo !
Bowie : Let’em through, Dick !
Travis (from the gallery outside his quarters) : Captain Dickinson !
Dickinson : Yes, sir.
Travis : Come to my office, please, captain.
Dickinson : Yes, sir.
Seguin (to Bowie) : Tengo noticias de Santa Anna. Good afternoon, Colonel Travis. We have news of Santa Anna. My son and I have…
Travis : Good day, señor Seguin. Señor, surely you should realize that even though you’re the alcalde of San Antonio de Bexar, it does not exempt you from military prohibitions. This establishment is closed to all civilians.
Seguin : I’m very sorry, Colonel Travis. Had I known your restrictions applied to me and my family, sir, I would not have….
Bowie : Now wait a minute, Travis, the Seguins have got news of Santa Anna.
Travis : I can’t doubt. We have a dozen rumours a day.
Bowie : Well, you can’t just… Por favor, Juan, tell him.
Seguin : Colonel, the Indians of San Blas have sent couriers to the vaqueros of my properties along the Sangre de Cristo. They say a large number of soldiers crossed the Baja Diablo two days ago.
Bowie : That put’em a lot closer than you thought. Go ahead, Juan.
Seguin : The Indian guessed the number of troops at over five-thousand. There are also large numbers of mounted soldiers and supply trains. Also, lower down on the Baja Diablo, another party of Indians saw signs of large number of shod horses crossing on a ford…
Travis : I’m sorry, señor Seguin — but as a civilian, you cannot realize how worthless this sort of information is. Some Indians told some vaqueros !… But anyway, thank you, sir, and good day.
Bowie : Travis, you know the Seguins are absolutely reliable !
Seguin : ‘You’ll excuse me…
Travis : I meant no personal offence, señor Seguin ; but I cannot make a plan of action based on third-hand rumors.
Seguin : I do not take personal affront, colonel Travis. Else I should be forced to act other than to simply bid you good day !
Bowie : Adiós, Juan.
Seguin : Adiós.
Bowie (approaching on his horse) : You’re a damn fool, Travis.
(Travis’ office. Music : Degüello)
Travis, pouring himself a drink of cherry : A true gentleman, Seguin. I dislike being rude to him.
Dickinson : Even allowing for a charros’ exaggerations, Santa Anna must’ve crossed the Baja in strength.
Travis : But I had to do it, Dick.
Dickinson : I’d say we have two, or… at best, three days before we see his banners.
Travis : The men were listening, and I can’t let that rabble know how weak we are and how stronge the enemy is.
Dickinson : You couldn’t do that, eh ?
Travis : No, I couldn’t, my honest and truthful and plain-spoken friend. You could, perhaps, but I couldn’t. Now, take a look at this. This oblique rampart here… Well, have sense, Dick ! Why should those men stay if they knew all the truth of our situation ? It’s different for Bowie, of course. He’s got a big stake in Texas. A couple of million acres I hear. But some of those men down there, well, they haven’t got…
Dickinson : You got any dollars or acres ?
Travis : I’ve got an extra suit of clothes, you know that.
[Uncut version : 00:21:27
But it’s different with me.
Dickinson : Why ?
Travis : Because I’m different from that rabble down below. Or, if you want it in more concise English, I am better than that rabble.
Dickinson, eyes on the map : I suppose we don’t extend this line to…
Travis : I know you think my attitude incongruous with the views of your idol, Mr. Thomas Jefferson, the messiah of equality. You think it snobbish of me to feel that I am better than that rabble.
Dickinson : Oh, Will, let it !
Travis : Tell me this : suppose we accept the first half of your Jefferson’s theory of equality, and grant that all men draw their first breath as equals. Now, let us project that life to the grave, which awaits us all. Do you deny that most men live lives of craven compromise, of snatching every shabby opportunity to feather their nest, to be quick to raise the call for safety and for security? Let the other man volunteer, let the other man carry the rifle, let the other man face the hard call of honor ? Why, even your Mr. Jefferson, writing in his ivory tower in Monticello, had to admit that most men are like that, and only a few — unhappily a very few — go to their graves with their honor untarnished, never having grabbed for the wealth that comes from opportunism or the popularity that comes with catering to those smelly masses. And can you, or any sane person, or your sainted Thomas Jefferson claim that such men are no more than the equal of those… those creatures down below ? And so I say, without any conceit or snobbishness, that I am better than that rabble down there.
Dickinson : You know, Will… I sometimes wonder how our friendship endures these quarrels.
Travis : Because we are alike, Dick. No matter how much you give lip service to the cause of the common man.
Susannah Dickinson : I brought you some coffee. I can hear you squabbling clear down the kitchen.]

(A hill over the town. Music : Ballad coda.)
Smitty : Boy ! So that’s it… San Antonio de Bexar. Means “Saint Anthony” in English. Colonel speaks Spanish, you know. You’ gonna pray, Sir ? But why, Sir ? I mean, there wasn’t no doubt we’d find her. The colonel just wasn’t sure which one of these here creeks was the shortest cut. He ain’t been here in nigh fifteen years.
Parson : Better make the signal, boy.
Smitty : Yes, Sir. Hope this powder ain’t damp… You don’t take it wrong I ask you all these questions, Parson ?
Parson : No boy, that’s how you learn : asking.
Smitty : Yes, Sir. But so many times every day you stop and give thanks… Mostly I can’t catch on what you’re thanking our Lord for — I mean, there’s nothin’ special.
Parson : I give thanks for the time and the place.
Smitty : The time and place, Parson ?
Parson : The time to live and the place to die. That’s all any man gets. No more, no less. Fire the signal, boy.
Smitty : Yes, sir.
(Another hill. Music : Tennesseans theme)
Thimblerig : Must be Parson and the boy.
Davy Crockett : Think so !
[As Crockett’s men ride towards their scouts, the Tennesseans theme segues into a rousing orchestral statement of the Ballad coda (accented by a church bell), which in turn winds down into a reprise of Tennesseans theme.]
Beekeeper : Well, there she be, Colonel ! After twenty days of hard a-riding !
Tennessean 1 : We gonn’ have to learn the lingo they use down here, Davy ?
Tennessean 2 : Where do we go, Davy, to the town or to the fort ?
Crockett : There’s no fort, it’s an old mission.
Scottish : You better take a better look. ‘ Lot of people movin’ in there.
Bob : Them guns don’t give i’ no mission look to me.
Smitty : Colonel, what do C-A-N-T-I-N-A spell ?
Bob : Cantina… Do it mean what I think it do ?
“It do” : It do.
Crockett : It means out of these deerskins and into our fooferaw !
Tennesseans, whooping and cheering [Music : Here’s to the ladies] :
— Hey, you’ve got my coat !
— Come on !

(In the Cantina)
Beekeeper, a girl on his knees : Hey, Pedro ! Hand me down that guitar. Now I want you folks all clump in here close together. I want you Texicans to open up your ears and listen to a little pure Tennessee !
(Cheering)
Here’s to the ladies, I love’em all !
Here’s to the ones I recall !
Here’s to the ladies, married or free
They all look pretty good to me.

The big and small ones,
The short and tall ones
Each one a lovely Valentine !…
(In the street)
Dickinson : Haaalt !
(Here’s to the ladies, I love the ladies,
Oh, how I wish they all were mine !)
Travis : Captain Dickinson, split your patrol, and send half each way down the river about five miles to look for any signs. Then report back to the mission.
Dickinson : Yes, sir. Forward ! Yo-ho !
(In the cantina ; a girl falls into Travis’ arms.)
Crockett : Sorry, sir ! She sorta come loose.
Travis (to Smitty sitting near the door) : I’d like… (Louder Smile I’d like to speak to David Crockett.
Smitty : You did.
Travis : That was David Crockett from Tennessee ?
Smitty : Yes, Sir. And I woulda know. Me and his neighbors back home. Only live forty mile’ apart. Col’nel Davy !
Travis : Are you David Crockett, sir ?
Crockett : That’s my name.
Travis : I’m Colonel Travis, commanding the garrison.
Crockett : I figured. (Drawing Smitty to his girl SmileS)" Well son, you’d better start growing up !
Travis : I’d like to speak t’you on a matter of gravest importance.
Crockett : Sure. Let’s find a corner. (Picking a bottle Smiles) Talking’s dry work. (To Smitty :)You’re learnin’ fast !
Beekeeper : Colonel, I’m resigning from you. I’m gonna marry up with Conchita and be the man of this house. Besame a kiss, señorita ! I toss around a mess of that proud spanish, too .
Crockett : Most important part.
Beekeeper : Let’s jig a little, Mamacita.
(Back room ; a man’s laying on the table near a candle.)
Crockett : Light there and rest easy, Travis, while I bed down this buc’. He just ain’t got no head for whisky. Parson !
Parson : Yeah, Davy.
Crockett : Take him away.
Parson : Yes, sir !
Crockett : Let’s wet our whistles. Words are dusty.
Travis : I don’t drink.
Crockett : Not ever ?
Travis : No.
Crockett : I’ve heard of such… Well, spread your wampum, Travis.
Travis : My title is Colonel.
Crockett : Me I’m a colonel too. Wouldn’t it sound kinda silly, the two of us chattering colonel, colonel, colonel, like a couple of marsh shield birds ? Just speak right up and call me Crockett. Don’t bother to use my title. Old drunken general Flatford gave it to me in the Choctaw Indian war. I’ll call you Travis.
Travis : Very well, Crockett. I’d like your permission to make a speech to your men.
Crockett : Well, they heard many a speech when I was congressifying. Whut would you talk about ?
Travis : Oh, about freedom… liberty…
Crockett : Well… They don’t need any such speech. These men are from Tennessee.
Travis : But I’d like to explain… why I want them to volunteer to fight against Santa Anna.
Crockett : Oh ?…
Travis : May I ?
Crockett (to a Tennessean falling into the chimney) : Not so careless ! You can’t get new clothes this side of Nacogdoches.
Tennessean (to another, a woman on his shoulders Smile Tag ! (Punch in the nose)
Crockett, showing them : Tennesseans ain’t exactly against fighting — but they ain’t much for listening to speeches. Whut would you tell them ?
Travis : Of the many and unendurable hardships the people have been subjected to, under the tyrannical government of this military dictator Santa Anna. We have no rights in the courts, no market for our produce. He has forbidden trade with the North…
Bull, in the doorway : Davy ! I want a chance for my money back.
Tennessean : Why don’t you leave Davy alone ? He done beat you thirty-eight times hand-runnin’ !
Bull : Thirty-six.
Tennessean : Thirty-eight.
Bull (elbow in the stomach) : Thirty-six.
Crockett : This will only take a minute, Travis.
Beeekeeper : Give me them feathers. Gentlemen… balance your feathers. Get set… go !
Bull : Ah ! Gotcha that time, Davy.
Beekeeper : It was fair and square.
Travis : Now if we can continue, I would like to say you…
Crockett : One minute, Travis. That was just for who gets first chance.
Bull : Prepare yourself, Davy.
Crockett : I’m prepared… (Punch)
Tennessean : He’s still on his feet !
Bull : Oh, no !
Beekeeper : Oh, yes !
Crockett : Oh, yes, and it’s my turn ! (Punch)
Smitty : Thirty-nine. Ain’t, Davy ?
Crockett : Seems like.
Beekeeper, to Bull on the floor : You’ll never learn ! Let’s get a bucket of water.
Crockett : Kind of a game the boys play back in Tennessee.
Travis : Even though time is running out, I feel I must postpone this interview until we can be assured of no further interruption.
Crockett : Step down off your high horse, Mister. You don’t get lard less’n you boil th’ hog. Have one of these see-gars. I brought’em all th’ way from New-Orleans. Were you going to tell my Tennesseans that a good many men, sound men all, had a… plot to ease the suffering of the people in these parts ? Or were you going to tell them that Steve Austin, Houston and others — and you too, Travis — had planned to declare for a republic ? To declare this the Republic of Texas ? Were you gonna tell’em that, Travis ?
Travis : I hadn’t thought this was generally known…
Crockett : It isn’t yet. Not till Austin separates the sheep from the goats. Not till he decides who’s on the right side. [Music : Ballad coda.] Republic… I like the sound of the word. Means people can live free, talk free, go or come, buy or sell, be drunk or sober — however they choose. Some words give you a feeling. Republic is one of those words that makes me tight in the throat. Same tightness a man gets when his baby takes his first step or… his first baby shaves and makes his first sound like a man. Some words can give you a feeling that make your heart warm. Republic is one of those words.
Travis : Crockett — I have, I believe, learned two things about you.
Crockett : Worthwhile, I hope.
Travis : You’re not the illiterate country bumpkin you would have people believe. You speak an excellent and concise English, when you wish. The, uh… bad grammar is a pose.
Crockett : Oh, a fella has to do a lot of things to get elected to Congress — I’ve kissed many a baby, too.
Travis : The other is that you came to Texas to fight with us.
Crockett : Don’t tell my Tennesseans that. They think that we came south to hunt and… get drunk.
(Tennessean : Whoo-hoo-hoo !)
Travis : They, uh… seem to have accomplished that.

(Mexican music – Flamenco dance – cheering.)

(In the street. Crockett looks at a young woman waiting for a buggy.)
Emil Sand, in the buggy : Good evening, my almost vanishing lady ! (To the driver : ) Puedes irte, Juan.
Juan : Si, Señor Sand.
Sand, to the boy wearing the luggage : Trae el equipaje aqui.
Graciela : This is incredible ! I had arranged for this carriage to take me…
Sand : I would be heart-broken if you left Bexar just now. And even more heart-broken if you left with my team of horses… which would bring a pretty penny in these times with two factions buying anything on four legs. (To Crockett Smile ‘You have business here ?
Crockett : Promised mother.
Sand : Your mother ?
Crockett : Pray to the North Star. Ten minutes every night. Long line of star-worshippers. It keeps the rheumatiz away.
Sand : It seems to me you’re looking for trouble.
Crockett : It do ?
Sand, to Graciela : Let’s go upstairs, unless you prefer discussing your business in front of every drunken loafer in Bexar. (To the boy Smile ¡ Andala pues !
(Crockett takes luggage in right hand and boy under left arm.)
Sand : I suppose that overdressed ignoramus is among the riffraff assembling here to resist Santa Anna. Huh ! They’ll find graves and nothing else. Santa Anna will sweep across… (He spots Crockett.)
Crockett : Overdressed ? I paid good money for these clothes !
Sand : Why ?…
(He slams the door ; Crockett knocks.)
Crockett : Lady’s luggage. (Slam, knocking) Gratuity for the boy, you forgot.
Mexican boy : Dinero…
(Slam, knock-knock ; Sand comes out with a pistol)
Crockett : Son, I guess he isn’t gonna tip you.
(Slam ; Crockett winks at the boy, posts on the other side of the door, knocks, takes off Sand’s pistol & enters the room with him.)
Crockett : Another thing I promised Mother : never to get in situations where people pointed guns at me. (To Graciela Smile Ma’am, it is possible that I am mistaken, but it seems to me you find this gentleman’s company distasteful. Now you saw…
Sand : Tell him to get out !
Graciela : Thank you, Sir, but there’s no way in which… you could be of help. And I am in no danger.
Crockett : I bid you good night, Ma’am. (To Sand Smile Gratuity for the boy !… (Sand tips the boy ; Crockett spits on pistol’s flint.) Your property, Sir. (Sand slams the door in his back.)
The boy, to Crockett : Muchísimas gracias.
(On the gallery. “Cantina music” in background. Crockett, lighting a cigar, hears a man’s voice Smile
Sand : And therefore, we are guaranteed the protection of the generalìssimo himself. Ah, but please, don’t misunderstand me : I don’t want all of your lands. Half will be sufficient for me, I am no glutton.
Graciela : ¡ Tu éres el más digno descendiente de la liga de puercos ! ¡ El más bajo de los cobardes ! ¿ Pero cómo es posible que tengas tan poca dignidad, tan poca vergüenza ?
(In the room)
Sand : Easy Graciela, easy ! I speak your language, but that’s too fast for me. Though I dare say I’m better of not understanding.
Graciela : You actually wanted me to agree to this… this atrocity ?
Sand : I actually did, and I actually do. You are an educated woman, Graciela — intelligent. Is there any other way to restore your family properties ? Santa Anna’s administrators rule Potosi.
Graciela : You… you expect me to marry you, with my father and my four brothers newly buried in Potosi — and my husband ?
(Crockett’s looking through the window.)
Sand : I expect it, because it is the logical course.
Graciela : To married you, logical ?
Sand : Of course ! I am acceptable to Santa Anna. And if he should be defeated, I would manage to become acceptable to his successors.
Graciela : Oh…
Sand : That’s the trick : to be acceptable to the powers that be. And let’s not pretend you’re a broken-hearted widow ! You barely knew the man. Your marriage was as much arranged as this one would be. Your family picked him out.
Graciela : That’s the way of my people.
Sand : You’ll say yes. It’s your only possible path. Like all women, you’ll postpone the decision, but you will say yes.
(Exit Sand ; seeing Crockett smoking on the balcony, who heads inside, he hurries downstairs.
In the room ; knocking ; Graciela opens)
Crockett, throwing his cigar away : Forgive me, Ma’am. But I was having a smoke out on that gallery and I couldn’t help but overhear — I wasn’t eavesdropping ! But it rankles me when somebody tries to force somebody to do something. You haven’t seen me before tonight, but I’m offering you my services. If that fella’s making you stay in Bexar, I’m ready, willing and able to provide you a transport to wherever you wanna go. And on the other hand, if you choose to stay in Bexar, I’m ready, willing and able to see that he don’t bother you.
Graciela : Would you answer one question with complete honesty, Mr… Tall American ?
Crockett : Ma’am, only modesty restrains me from telling you that I am widely known for my truthfulness.
Graciela : Would you so quickly offer to defend me if I was sixty years old and wrinkled ? Or is it because I am young, and a widow, and you are far from home and your loved ones ?… But, thank you anyway, sir. In any event, this is a matter in which no outsider could help. And… Mr. Tall American !… I do believe that a woman in trouble, even though sixty and wrinkled, could turn to you for help.
Crockett : Good night, Ma’am.

(In the street ; Sand is waiting for Crockett with a group of Mexicans)
Sand, to his men : ¡ Adelante !
(Fight ; Bowie arriving on his horse rushes into the conflict , yelling : Ah !, then sides with Crockett.)
Crockett to Bowie, tightening a man under each arm : Well, thanks, friend. If you don’t insist on having them to yourself, I’ll give you a hand.
Bowie : Pleasure, friend.
(Crockett fells one with Bowie’s knife’s handle)
Crockett : You must be Jim Bowie. The size and shape is as described, and this knife is certainly everything I heard it was.
Bowie : I’m Bowie.
Crockett : I’m Davy Crockett.
Bowie, still strangling a Mexican under his left arm : Well ! I heard a lot about you. (Shake-hands)
Crockett : I heard a lot about you, too. I’d admire to buy you a drink — or eight, or ten.
Bowie : Oh, excuse me… (He takes back his knife & fells the Mexican with the handle.) You have some trouble with Emil Sand ?
Crockett : Who’s Emil Sand ?
Bowie : Merchant.
Crockett : Tall fella, butter-colored hair ?
Bowie : Yeah, that’s him.
Crockett : I’ve had some words with him. Intend to have some more. How ‘bout that drink ?
Bowie : Honored, Congressman Crockett !
Crockett : Oh, please Jim ! Don’t call me that. I’ve been trying to live it down.

(Outside the Cantina — where Tennesseans are snoring.)
Smitty : Here’s your extra coat, Davy — and a jug.
Crockett : Thoughtful. You’d better get some sleep, Smitty.
Smitty : I’m not tired. It’s Mexico ! Exciting night.
Crockett : Yeah, well, you’d still better get some sleep.
Smitty : All right, Davy.
Bowie : ‘Night, Smitty.
Smitty : Good night, colonel Bowie… Jim !
Crockett : Took a long time for this night to get un-exciting.
Bowie : It sure did. This is a mighty pretty one, though.
Crockett : Understand you move down here lock, stock and barrel, Jim.
Bowie : I didn’t plan on moving. Came for a visit and stayed.
Crockett : I gather you like it…
Bowie : Oh, Davy, if you only knew Mexico !… It’s wonderful.
Crockett : I thought she was a burnt over desert, most of the time.
Bowie : Nah ! most Northerners think that, it ain’t so ! Big valleys between high mountains… Just everything a man could want in the way of country, for looking at or… or for growing on. But mostly… mostly it’s the people, Davy. They got… and this is kinda hard to explain, but… they got courage, and they got dignity. They ain’t afraid to die… and what seems most important to me is that they ain’t afraid to live. Today is important to them, not the dollar tomorrow might bring. Ah, I suppose the Yankees say that’s lazy. Me, I say it’s a way of livin’. And the womenfolk, pss… Well, David !…
Crockett : I figured you favored the Mexican ladies : they tell me you married one.
Bowie : Yeah, I uh… I did. I… Well, Davy, I… I just ain’ got… you know, your way of putting things into… into words but… I got a fine family. Wonderful wife and two fine boys. I guess I’m what you’d call a lucky man.
Crockett : Now, that ain’t a bad stab at puttin’ it into words.
Bowie : I, uh, sent them up to Coahuila, with all the trouble around here, you know, I did’t wanna get them mixed up…
Graciela, to Crockett : May I speak privately with you, sir ?
Crockett : Oh sure, but…
Bowie : You’re the señora de Lopez, aren’t you ?
Graciela : Señor Bowie — I am sorry, I did not recognize you at first.
Bowie : Oh, Señora, this place ain’t fit for…
Graciela : I know, but the matter is urgent and… Could I have a few private words with this gentleman ?
Bowie : Oh sure, excuse me. I’ll be inside, Crockett.
Graciela : Crockett ? You are the famous David Crockett ?
Crockett : Well, I’m Crockett. They named me Davy after an uncle who didn’t leave Pa the farm after all.
Graciela : Well, Mr. Crockett, shortly after you left my room, I heard the noise of an altercation in the street. I could hear the sound, though I could not see it from my window. It sounded like… like a drunken brawl.
Crockett : Well, sittin’ right here, I didn’t hear a thing.
Graciela : Well, anyway, I saw lights in the old church and people moving about, and one of them was Emil. And a thought came to me : as you may know, colonel Travis has ordered all powder and balls from the merchants of Bexar — and he didn’t find any at Emil’s warehouse. It’s my opinion, it’s all hidden in the basement of that church, and… Mr. Crockett, the defenders of Texas are going to need that powder against Santa Anna.
Graciela : And you’re against Santa Anna ?
Graciela : Bitterly, of course.
Crockett : And this… Emil, he’s for him ?
Graciela : Yes, he is.
Crockett : Then, how did he figure you’d marry him ? Political arguments don’t flavor folks’ supper.
Graciela : Nevertheless, I am going to marry him, and please let’s not discuss it, Mr. Crockett.
Crockett : The name is Davy, and I couldn’t sleep nights thinking of you marrying him.
Graciela : Will you say goodbye for me to Mr. Bowie ?
Crockett : Well, I…
Graciela : I can make my own way — and I hope the information is helpful.
(Inside)
Crockett : Someth’ interesting, Jim. Parson, round up a couple of the men, fairly sober, and meet us out on the street.
Parson : Where are we goin’ ?
Crockett : To church.
Parson : Yeah, Davy.

(Outside San Fernando church)
Beekeeper : Hey, Parson ! Parson, why’d you run off without me ?
Parson : I told him to stay behind. He’s drunk.
Beekeeper : Oh, stick to the point : why’d you run off without me ?
Crockett : Jim, this is Beekeeper — Jim Bowie.
Beekeeper : Hi.
Bowie : Hi.
Crockett : You can come along, but hold your breath : can they smell, they’ll be warned you’re coming.
Beekeeper : Hic !… ‘scuse me.
(In the church)
Bowie, to Beekeeper : Grab that torch.
Beekeeper : Yeah… (He stumbles, catches a rope & rings the bell.) ‘Scuse me.
(In the basement)
Bowie : Well ! (Handing his torch Smile Here, Parson…
Parson : Yes, sir.
Crockett : Rifles…
Beekeeper : Must be fifty of’em !
Crockett, looking at the barrels : Pólvora ?
Bowie : That’s gunpowder !
Beekeeper, with his torch : Let me take a look at that stuff here.
Bowie : Watch this !
Crockett : Stand back and stand still !
Beekeeper : ‘scuzzz…
Bowie : Must be a ton of it. I’m sure gonna be looking forward to seeing that soldier boy’s face when we bring this in !
[Uncut version : 00:56:22
Sand, appearing upstairs with his pistol : You’ll never have that pleasure.
Crockett : You have something in common with that fellow that beat me in the election. Man sure got around.
Sand : You’ll die talking, and soon — and you, the drunken one.
Beekeeper : Hic !… ‘scuse me.
Sand, to Smitty holding a stick : Drop it !… Over with the others.
Parson, kneeling down : Not the boy, he’s too young to die ! The gates of Heaven swing not ajar for slayer of youth !
Beekeeper, bringing his torch over the powder : We are all going to the same place — at least, we’ll start together !
(Sand’s thugs run away. While Bowie turns aside Sand’s pistols with a stick smash, Crockett grabs his knife and throws it to Sand’s chest.)
Parson, to Beekeeper : You were slow enough to catch on !
Bowie : You got good men, Davy. Everyone !
Crockett : Jim, this knife… You better watch it ! First time ‘ever want to steal in my life.
Smitty, showing Sand : Is… is he dead ?
Crockett : Well, sort of. (To Bowie Smile We’ll pick this stuff up’n the morning.
Bowie : Yeah, sure. (To Smitty Smile Better get some sleep.

(Graciela’s room ; knocking)
Crockett : I saw the light on your window. Thought you’d be fast asleep : it’s halfway to daybreak.
Graciela : I couldn’t sleep, and… there was so much to think about.
Crockett : Yeah. I always envied people could shut off their thinkin’n’ goes on to sleep. Me I’m a stall walker.
Graciela : May I, there’s a decanter of wine and… I know this is terribly unconventional. But I… I just seem to have such a desperate need to talk to someone. And… and now that that someone is here, I… just don’t know how to start.
Crockett : Well, a good beginning would be to tell me your name. You know mine, but I don’t know yours. Bowie said the… something or other — I don’t know what.
Graciela : My name is Graciela Carmela Maria de Lopez y Bexar.
Crockett : Wah ! That’s a little long for this short memory ! What do they call you for short ‘n’ friendly ?
Graciela : Well, when I was a little girl, they used to call me Flaca.
Crockett : Flaca ?
Graciela : It’s a kind of nickname for “skinny”.
Crockett, looking her up and down : Bad eyes for curves whoever calls you that ! (She turns away to hide her grin.) Flaca, this would be a good time, some people would think, for me not to mention this. But don’t plan on marrying on that blond-headed Emil. He’s dead.
Graciela : Dead… Dead ?
Crockett : Died under Bowie’s knife. (Shaking his head (Smile) Lying is such a hard habit to break… Bowie didn’t kill him. The knife was in my hand at that time.
Graciela : Emil’s certainly the last human I’d cry over. And yet, I… I’m going to cry. It’s just, Davy, that so much has happened to me in such a short time. My family… I don’t… Just someone to lean on.
Crockett : Go ahead and cry, Flaca. It may help.]

(Next morning. Shots of Mexicans troops crossing a river. Music : Mexicans theme.
In Bexar. Crockett is standing upon the veranda outside Flaca’s room.)
Graciela, at her window in night dresses : It’s a beautiful morning, Davy Crockett !
Crockett, saluting : It is that, [Graciela Carmela] Maria de Lopez y Bexar !
Graciela : My goodness ! You remember all that ?
Crockett : Sure. [Music : Green leaves of Summer] I’m not as stupid as I look from the outside. What’s Spanish for “breakfast” ?
Graciela : Desayuno.
Crockett : Well, let’s take a paseado out and get some desayuno.
Graciela : Paseado ?
Crockett : That means “walk” ?
Graciela : That means “have walked” — but never mind, I’ll get dressed, and…
Crockett : Wait a minute. First, write me a letter.
Graciela : A letter ?
Crockett : In Spanish.
Graciela : Of course. To whom is the letter addressed ?
Crockett : “To the honorable Davy Crockett Esquire…”
Graciela : You wish a letter written to yourself ?
Crockett : Yep. “To the honorable Davy Crockett Esquire, former congressman of the United States of America. Esteemed Sir…”

(Outside the church ; two carts are loaded with powder & guns, the first one driven by Parson & Smitty, the second by Beekeeper.)
Bowie, riding alongside : Let’s go ! Hurry it up there. (Outside the hotel, to the Gambler Smile Have you seen Davy ?
Thimblerig : Ain’t nobody seen Davy, he ain’t about.
Crockett : First lie you’ told today, Thimblerig !
Bowie : ‘Morning, Davy.
Crockett, sitting near Beekeeper : Howdy !
Bull : Say Davy, what kind of load you got there ?
Crockett : Presents for some friends. Let’s go, Parson !

[Uncut version : 01:04:42
(Another cart loaded with household things ; some fall down)
Mrs Guy : Oh no !… Here, Maribel, take the reins. Well, I declare…
Graciela, smiling : Let me help you.
Mrs Guy : Oh, thank you, Miss. He went-a off on our best horse. And he melted down all night, of course, for bullets. Then he rode off to that damn blasted Sam Houston… Maribel, give her some meal.
Maribel : I can’t, Mama, I got the reins.
Mrs Guy : I’m going, he said, ready and willing to die for Texas. Well, he then took the rifle, or he wouldn’ have to wait for Santa Anna to kill him. Any man that leaves his kids to go to war is nothing but a coward ! Ow — thank you, Miss.]
Part 2 to follow....
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Re: The Script

Postby AlamoMo on Sun Sep 28, 2008 5:20 pm

Many thanks for saving that one John :) :) :) :)

Looking forward to Part 2 now

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Re: The Script

Postby Seguin on Sun Sep 28, 2008 8:13 pm

It´s interesting to read the script because you easily miss some expressions or sayings when you watch the film. What an enormous job it must´ve been to transcribe the whole film, but it certainly is a useful tool to have.
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Re: The Script

Postby NefariousNed on Sun Sep 28, 2008 8:54 pm

Regarding Smitty's saying, 'Colonel speaks Spanish, you know," you'd have to refer back to the original Grant script, as what Alamo John has so lovingly saved is the dialogue continuity of the film. While there are a few errors and 'mis-hearings', all in all, it is a nice thing to have at hand.

Anyway, in Grant's original script, there's a running joke how Crockett can speak Spanish, which concludes with:

Scene 22. page 9

EXT. BEXAR STREET DAY
As the Tennesseans ride down the street and up to the front of the hotel which is side by side with the Cantina. Crockett is in the lead, and now we see the suit. The others have changed clothes, but none of them can compare to Crockett's outfit which, while perhaps not in the best taste, is expensive and eye-filling. Juan Seguin, walking along the walk in frot of ther buildings, stops as the Tennesseans pull up their horses.

BEEKEEPER
Sling some Spanish at that feller, Davy--Ast him where we can feed and sleep--and maybe drink.

CROCKETT
Senor....habla Espanol?

SEGUIN (politely)
Si.

CONTINUED PAGE 10

CROCKETT
Where kin we find a decent place to stay-- or anyway half-decent--or anyway a place to stay?

BEEKEEPER
Davy, you sure speak proud Spanish.

In the current incarnation of the film, when Beekeeper tells Crockett in the Cantina, "I toss around a mess of that proud Spanish too, you know," you now know why he says that.
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Re: The Script

Postby Seguin on Sun Sep 28, 2008 10:26 pm

Ah, so that´s why we hear about Crockett speaking Spanish! Since they did´nt use the scene you just described, they should´ve deleted all hints to that running gag. Oh, well...
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Re: The Script

Postby Alamo John UK on Mon Sep 29, 2008 12:12 pm

Thanks for filling those gaps Ned, I feel you may have a bit more work to do on the following couple of segments to clarify a few points here & there, so if you're ready here goes..................

PART 2

(Alamo front gate)
Sentry : Halt ! Who goes there ?
Bowie : Is that you, Bob ?
Sentry : Why, sure, can’t you see ?
Bowie : Then what kind of idiot nonsense is this “Who goes there” ?
Sentry : Well, Travis — colonel Travis, that is — he says that I should…
Bowie : I don’t care what Travis said. Open the gate ‘fore I shoot you off that wall !
Travis (appearing) : Sentry ! Open the gate for colonel Bowie.
(In the yard)
Bowie : Near a ton of good powder here, men ! Get it unloaded ! That long one there, he’s Davy Crockett — and three of his good men !
[Uncut version : 01:06:24
Dennison, looking at Smitty : This sure ain’t quite a man. He’s a stretched-dwarfed.
Bowie : Don’t you gamble he’s no man. That ain’t mother’s milk on his sleeve, that’s a powder burn !
Travis : You had a fight ?
Smitty : Oh, it was nothing much. Was it… Jim ?
Bowie, laughing : Well, I’ve had trimmer edges. ]
Crockett : Hello, Travis.
Travis : Colonel Crockett… Looks like the answer to a prayer ! Colonel, I’d be pleased if you’d join me in my quarter for some refreshment.
Crockett : Proud to.
Travis : Oh, and you too, colonel Bowie, if you will.
Beekeeper, to Dennison : I’m a stranger around these here parts. What do you Texicans use for drinkin’ whiskey ?
Dennison : Drinkin’ whiskey.
Beekeeper : Well, you got manners, aintcha ?

(The gallery outside Travis’s office)
Travis : Captain Dickinson, this is colonel Davy Crockett.
Dickinson : Pleased to meet you.
Crockett : How do you do ?
(Inside)
Travis : Oh, and this is my cousin, Mrs. Dickinson — colonel Crockett.
Susannah : Colonel Bowie…
Bowie : Hello Sue.
Susannah : Well, it’s nice meeting you, Davy Crockett. I feel as if I know you already, you see… part of my family comes from Tennessee and — well, your name is a household word there — at least, in our house it was.
Crockett : Thank you Ma’am. It’s nice to be well thought of.
Lisa : Mommy…
Susannah : Oh, yes darling. Oh ! I’ve asked you not to climb those stairs alone.
Crockett : Well, who’s this ?
Susannah : You say hello to colonel Crockett ?
Lisa : Hello.
Crockett : Every size they get to, seems to be the most lovable.
Susannah : Will you gentlemen excuse me ?
Lisa : Goodbye, Colonel.
Crockett : Goodbye !… Kind of a shame kids have to grow up into people.
Travis : It’s good we’re all here, gentlemen ! A cigar ?… Please, make yourselves comfortable. I have some news. Fannin is doing well at Goliad. He’s mustered almost a thousand men and should be ready to move south by the first of the week.
Bowie : A thousand ? It don’t seem possible.
Travis : It does sound too good to be true, I must confess. But we can only admit our doubts to each other, in the privacy of a room, and not in front of the men. As far as the volunteers are concerned, we’ll be sure that Fannin has a thousand men — or more.
Bowie : I got a reputation for truth, Travis.
Crockett : I ain’t. Everybody says I’m a born liar. But whether we talk out loud or quiet don’t seem to me the point right now. Point is how many men has Fannin, and will he get here in time ?
Bowie : Whether he does or doesn’t, we’ll be trapped here, and for no reason. What we should do is burn all of Bexar, including this mission, and…
Travis : And fight a harassing action ? Annoy Santa Anna while he sweeps north across the whole of Texas ? That’s colonel Bowie’s theory…
Bowie : We could hit and run !…
Travis : …and I can’t accept that idea !
Bowie : …Jump him at every creek crossing between here and San Jacinto…
Travis : You seem to forget one thing, colonel Bowie…
Bowie : What ?
Travis : That I command — and I have already decided against your plan ! Now… Let us attack a more important problem : colonel Crockett’s Tennesseans. Will they fight, Colonel ?
Crockett : Up to the last time I saw’em, they hadn’t shown any strong feelings against fighting.
Travis : But can you persuade your men to come into this mission ?
Crockett : I can ask them.
Travis : And you’re a very persuasive man, according to your reputation… Build up the story that Fannin has a thousand — no, two thousand men. Play down the side of Santa Anna’s army and…
Bowie : Hold on, Travis ! We’ve been all through this. He wants me to lie to my men too — keep’em here with lies !
Travis : Let the truth of Santa Anna’s strength be known down there in the yards, and by daybreak, there won’t be a baker’s dozen left !
Bowie : You’re calling my boys cowards ?
Travis : Let us dispense with fire-eaters pyrotechnics, colonel Bowie !
Bowie : Just remember this, Travis : my men are all volunteers, they’re here because they wanna be. But there’s nothing to keep’em from packing up and getting out of here !
Travis : I’m aware that your men are militia, and like all volunteers, undisciplined ! Good day, colonel Bowie.
[Exit Bowie. Music : Ballad coda.]
Crockett : Last night gave you a pretty good idea of the discipline of my men…
Travis : Our position here is desperate. And I feel sure that where Crockett leads, his men will follow.
Crockett : Yeah. That’s a responsibility that’s… been kinda worrying me.
[Music : The Eyes of Texas.]
[Uncut version : (01:11:20)
(In the yard)
Bowie : You know, Davy, some years ago, I swore I'd not throw my knife every time somebody disagreed with me, but I’m telling you that Travis is driving me rather…
Crockett : That word Jim, uh…
Bowie : What word ?
Crockett : Pyrotechnics. What does that mean ?
Bowie : Why, it means uh… uhh… Ah ! You know what it means as well as I do !
Crockett : Sure — and you were a little on the fireworks side, Jim… See you.
Bowie : Yeah. ]
Beekeeper : Thank you, gentlemen. I’m gonna pass the word around : what you Texans use for drinkin’ whiskey… is drinkin’ whiskey. And what’s more important, you got real good manners… seeing how you suffer the handicap of never having been in Tennessee.
Bowie’s man : Hey Davy, is it true that you fit a four-days fight with Mike Fink ?
Crockett : Why, that’s a blasted lie ! One of them stories loose-mouth’ people tell around. Mike and me quit at sundown. Wouldn’ve been the fourth day until… next morning. See you men !
Smitty : Let her rip, Parson !

(Outside the hotel)
Crockett : Señora Lopez…
Graciela, to Seguin : Don Juan, this is Mr. Davy Crockett.
Seguin : Honored.
Crockett : How do you do ?
Graciela : Señor Seguin is the alcalde — I mean, the mayor of San Antonio de Bexar.
Crockett : Uh, he’s got a pretty busy town. The people are running like sheep that have smelled a wolf pack.
(Under the veranda)
Beekeeper : I never said no such a thing ! [Music : Here’s to the ladies.] When us took that powder in there, that fella Travis asked if us Tennesseans wasa gonna join up with him. That’s all. (To Thimblerig Smile He never asked us to fight his fight for him !
Thimblerig, putting a tamale in his mouth : Have some breakfast.
Beekeeper, spitting like he were burnt : Breakfast ! Tortillas ?
Mexican seller : Tamale !
Beekeeper, a drink in hand : Never get burnt drinking this stuff.
Thimblerig : Well, I only know part of this here Texas, and none of these here Texicans is related to me, so why should I fight for them ?
Tennessean : Right. Ain’t our ox that’s gettin’ gored.
Crockett : Talking about whose ox gets gored, figure this : fellow gets in the habit of goring oxes, whets his appetite. He may come up north next and gore yours ! Men, we’re in a little fix, sort of. The he-bull around here, general Santa Anna, he’s mad at us.
Beekeeper : Yeah ?
Crockett : He’s wrote us a letter. I can’t read it, it’s in Spanish, (winking at Flaca Smile but the young lady will.
Graciela : It is addressed to Davy Crockett, and the Tennesseans who accompany him. “Be it known : you are interlopers in a country where you are neither wanted nor welcome. [Music : Degüello] This is the order you are given : depart with all haste and at once, because it has come to our attention that you are possibly considering joining the rebels now a-skulking in the mission. This is not your fight. Depart. Should you fail to abide by this order, I shall chastise you even unto death. Signed: Generalìssimo Antonio Miguel de Santa Anna.”
Beekeeper : Huh ! Fellow kinda fancies himself, don’t he ? Sure does have a big sounding name…
Tennessean : Givin’ us orders… Who do he think he am ? Andy “by God” Jackson ?
Thimblerig : Riles me when somebody tells me to go here, or I can’t go there.
Beekeeper : I ain’t never been run outta no place… Except the time my old paw kicked me over every acr’of th’half-rig section back in Ohio. But I was just a shirt-tail kid then — ‘n’ my paw had big feet.
Thimblerig : Well what do you say, Davy ? ’We gonna let this man tell us what we can or can’t do?
Smitty, crossing his arms : Davy, maybe we’d better saddle up and pay this fella a visit. (All look at him.)
Bob : Do chastise mean what I think it do ?
“It do” : It do.
Beekeeper : Davy, let’s do saddle up and go learn that gentleman his manners !
Crockett : We won’t have to. He is wearing out horses coming toward us.
Beekeper : Hm hm… Guess we can’t stop him from coming… But I reckon we can arrange for him to limp going back !
Tennessean : I swear I’s beginning to think these Texicans wasn’t as neighborly as they might be, but here they’ve gone and arranged a nice fight for us visitors.
Crockett : One thing I’ll oughta tell you — Santa Anna never wrote that letter. I did. Or rather, I had this lady here write it. I was figuring how to tell you fellas about this Texican hoedown. And I was wondering what this Santa Anna woul’ve said to us Tennesseans if he’d had had a chance to say it.
Beekeeper : Davy, I ain’t never said I ain’t been whooped. I have. But I give each and everyone fella a chance to dig in and get the job done. But I ain’t never took nobody’s word in advance they’s gonna chast… to…
Thimblerig, standing up : Chastise.
Beekeeper : Chastise, much obliged.
Thimblerig : Well, speak up, Davy. We’re gonna stay ain’t we ?
Crockett : Well, I’m… I’m thinking it over.
Beekeeper : What is there to think about ? You’ getting that old ? ‘Man toed the mark and dared us ! Chastise, he said !
Bull : That’s right, chastise !
Crockett : But I wrote the letter !
Beekeeper : Oh, now don’t you start weaselin’ ! You said yourself them would be the very words he’d write us, even he was to write us a letter !
Crockett : Well, gentlemen… You convinced me. We’ll fight.
Beekeeper : Ah ! That’s more like it !
Tennesseans : Now you’re talkin’, Davy.
Crockett : But first, the young lady and I will take a pasear. Gather up your possibles and I’ll meet up with you later.
Tennessean : Right, Davy.
Crockett, to Seguin : Con permiso…
[Music : Ballad coda]
Graciela : Your spanish is improving.
Beekeeper : Kind of cheers me to see the Colonel with that lady. Last couple of years he had me worried. Lately, he ain’t been looking at the girls like he’s starved. [Music shifts to Love theme.]
Thimblerig : Being in congress has ruined many a good man.

(In the forest )
Graciela : All I hear is Crockett the bear-killer, Crockett the Indian-fighter, Crockett the brawler… Crockett has brains !
Crockett : Kept it hidden a number of years. You like my Tennesseans, Flaca ?
Flaca : Oh yes !
Crockett : ‘Could strain ten thousand and never come up with twenty-three better. Everyone of those men has been at my elbow — save the boy, Smitty — when some difficulty arose. Some of them don’t bath this often as polite folks would think necessary, but every one of them smells sweet to me !… And I was the one that said this country was burnt-over sand ! It’s green and growing — like those green pastures they talk about. Lord above ! That’s one beautiful tree ! [Music : Green Leaves of Summer, orchestral version] This tree must’ve been growed before man put his first dirty footprints on this prairie. Kind of a tree Adam and Eve must have met under. (Flaca leans against the trunk.) You know something, Flaca ? I guess I saw a who-knows-how-many trees before I ever took a long, thoughtful look at one. Mostly I looked at a tree to see was there a… bear in it or an Indian behind it.
Graciela : Davy, what’s going to happen to us ? I mean, to you and me ?
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Crockett : Well, when I was a boy in Kentucky a… fella and his gal, he’d … hang up a bunch of trees like that, cut one down for a ridgepole and… built a cabin alongside the other. Seems like all anyone would ever need. I guess some of us need more than that.
Graciela : So many things have happened to me lately that… I’m almost never sure of anything. But I think I love you.
Crockett: Could be. Old buck, young doe… Each has something the other lacks.]
I’m gonna tell you something, Flaca, and I want you to listen tight. It may sound that I’m talking about me, but I’m not, I’m talking about you. As a matter of fact, I’m talking about all people everywhere. When I came down here to Texas, I was looking for something. I didn’t know what. It seems like you added up my life and I’ve spent it all either stomping other men — or in some cases getting stomped. Had me some money, and had me some medals. But none of it seemed a lifetime worth the pain of the mother that bore me. ‘Was like I was empty. Well I’m not empty any more. That’s what’s important. [Music : Ballad coda.] To feel useful in this old world. To hit a lick against what’s wrong, or to say a word for what’s right, even though you get walloped for sayin’ that word. Now, I may sound like a Bible beater yellin’ up a revival at a river crossing camp meeting, but that don’t change the truth none. There’s right and there’s wrong. You gotta do one or the other. You do the one and you’re living. You do the other, and you may be walking around, but you’re dead as a beaver hat… I’d hoped for a horse, but there’s nothing wrong with a good strong mule.
Graciela : My things ! All… All my luggage is’ in the buggy…
Crockett : Had my men take care of it. Your geegaws may be rough-packed, but they’re all there.
Graciela : You are sending me away. You… you talked about the fight against evil, but you… you are sending me to safety.
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Is that what love does, Davy?]
Crockett : Flaca, you have an important name. You know a million words, and how they should be used. I’m sending you to fight your war : to talk up a howling mob. I’ll stay here and hit a lick. I hope you can drive a mule.
Parson : His name’s Jesus, they told me. He seems a good, honest mule.
Graciela : Maybe I’ll never see you again.
[Music : Green Leaves of summer, accordion]
Crockett : ‘That what’s written, that’s what’s written. When it’s time it’s time. Talkin’ only makes it the harder, Flaca. So stir up that mule.
Flaca : Davy, I… (She stirs up the mule.)
Parson : You never pray, do you, Davy ?
Crockett : I never found the time.

(At the Alamo. Music : Tennesseans theme.)
Sentry, at front gate : Sir, Tennesseans !
Dickinson, calling : Colonel Travis ! Crockett and his men.
Travis, coming up the stairs : Go down and open the gate.
Dennison : I’ll just holler down.
Travis : Your orders were to go down, not holler down, Mr. Dennison !
Dennison : Yes, sir…
Travis, to Dickinson : Crack shots, those Tennesseans !
Dickinson : Twenty times their number’s what we need, and more… Oh, I’m sorry, Will. Such gloomy remarks are for your ears alone.
Travis : Isn’t that Bowie galloping up there to catch’em ? I can just hear him pleading his cause.
Dickinson : Crockett seems to me the type of man that would choose Bowie.
Travis : What you mean is Crockett isn’t the type of man to choose me ?
Dickinson : Oh, Will ! Depend on you to say it the most brutal way.
Travis : Most facts are brutal. Just look at that great knife-fighter yapping at Crockett. “Cut, slash and run !” Let’s get mounted. “Cut, slash’n’ run !”…

(On the road)
Bowie : Cut, slash and run. Cost Santa Anna fifty or a hundred troops at every creek crossing between here and the North.
Crockett : Sounds reasonable the way you put it, Jim — but Travis, he’s got a point too. Takes thinkin’ on.
Sentry : Hey, Jim, halt ! Who goes there ?
Bowie : Bob ! I swear I’m gonna shoot you off that wall ! Are you blind ?
Bob : That’s what’s I was told to holler every time.
Bowie : Well, don’t holler at me ! (To Crockett Smile Idiot… You think on it, Davy, you’ll side with me.
(In the yard – a bell rings as music ends.)
Blind Nell : What is it ?
Jocko : Tennesseans, Nell. Twenty-three of’em. All away from home.
Nell : Do you recognize any of them, Jocko ? Could be my brother Malachai with them ? Oh, he was a considerable fellow to go where there was trouble.
Jocko : He was that. But Nell, you know, Malachai was hung — or so some folks told us.
Travis : Colonel Crockett, I am glad you were able to persuade your men to join us.
Crockett : Well, they insisted, sort of.
Travis : Our heartiest welcome ! Ladies and gentlemen, we are proud to welcome these patriotic men who have traveled fifteen hundred miles to join us in our hour of need. Sergeant Lightfoot !
Lightfoot : Yes, sir ?
Travis : You will have your men raise a cheer for our gallant allies from the illustrious state of Tennessee.
Lightfoot : Yes, Sir ! Hip, hip!
All : Hooray !… (ter)
Travis : Captain, you will attend to the billeting of these men. After you are quartered, gentlemen, I will take you on a tour of the emplacements.
Dickinson : This way, gentlemen.
Jocko : Crockett ! Davy Crockett !… Whe’re from Tennessee.
Crockett : Howdy, folks !
Nell : We’ve seen you when you came to Stink Wells, speak about that job for Congress.
Jocko : You shook hands with me.
Crockett : Oh, I’ll do her again ! (Shake-hands)
Nell : He didn’t vote for you though. Other fella gave him four bits.
Jocko : I’m sorry.
Crockett : Don’t be. Glad there were enough sensible folks like you to vote me out of that job. But later on, we’ll have a real old home talkfest, but right now, we got to get quartered and bedded down. ‘You excuse us ?
Nell : You should have voted for him, Jocko !

(In town - Music : Mexicans theme)
Bexareno : ¡ Soldados !
Officer : ¡ Columna a la izquierda !
(The Alamo. On the roof of the chapel.)
Travis : Of our twenty-four pieces of ordnance, five are these six-pounders.
Sentry : Something’s stirring in town !
Travis : Ladies will take cover, please ! Men, to your battle positions !
(In town – a soldier snatches a villager’s shirt to make a white flag)
Mexican officer : ¡Teniente Rodriguez ! Los documentos…Teniente, compla con sus ordones.
Rodriguez : Si, Señor.
(The Alamo)
Travis : Captain Dickinson, are your men disposed ?
Dickinson : At their posts, sir !
Travis : No one will fire unless I so order ! Those people are under the protection of a flag of truce !
(In front of South-east palisade Smile
Teniente Rodriguez : Columna, ¡alto! (Reading Smile “From the headquarters of Generalìssimo Antonio López de Santa Anna, absolute ruler of Mexico, to the rebel commander who deems himself in command of the rebels occupying the mission. Be it known : the province of Mexico known as Texas has shown itself to be in active and treasonous revolt against the rule of Generalìssimo Santa Anna. The Generalìssimo in his kindness, issues the following order : All occupants of the mission will leave at once, leaving all arms and ammunition behind them. If this order is not followed with your dispatch, the Generalìssimo will be reducin’ the mission by assault. There will be no quarter given. Signed…”
(Travis lights the cannon’s match with his cigar ; ball goes off.)
Rodriguez : ¡ Columna a la derecha ! ¡ Marchen !
(Travis turns his heels)
Crockett : Well, what do you think, Jim ?
Bowie : Hm… I hate to say anything good about that long-winded jackanapes, but he does know the short way to start a war.
[Music : Ballad coda.]

INTERMISSION

[Uncut version : Intermission /Entr’acte music : Ballad of the Alamo :

In the southern part of Texas, near the town of San-Antone
Stands a fortress all in ruins that the weeds have overgrown.
You may look in vain for crosses and you’ll never see a one
But sometimes between the setting and the rising of the sun,
You can hear a ghostly bugle as the men go marching by
You can hear them as they answer to that roll call in the sky :

“Col’nel Travis, Davy Crockett, and the hundred eighty more
Captain Dickinson and Jim Bowie ? — Present and accounted for !”

Let the old men tell the story, let the legend grow and grow
Of the thirteen days of glory at the siege of Alamo.
Lift the tattered banners proudly while the eyes of Texans shine
Let the fort that was a mission be an everlasting shrine
Once they fought to give us freedom, that is all you need to know
Of the thirteen days of glory at the siege of Alamo.

Coda :
Every musket is ready
Every hand holds a sword
Just a small band of soldiers
Standin’ tall in the eyes of the Lord.]


(Mexicans troops – Mexican theme in background.
The Alamo ramparts-North wall, west corner)
Tavis, looking through a telescope, to Dickinson writing down : Sixth… The Sixth Vera Cruzano fusillers. They’re bivouacking about a mile south of our west bastion .
Dickinson : Light artillery, lancers, some engineers… Not one unit of heavy assault troops has arrived yet, and it still adds up to two thousand men.
Travis : That’ll be to our advantage, Dick. That main body must be strung out from miles : the assault infantry, heavy artillery, commissary and supply trains… They won’t be here for four or five days, and the actual battle can’t start until then. Oh, there’ll be an occasional sortie or artillery fire, feelin’ out our defenses. [Music : Degüello] They won’t commit themselves to an actual attack until Santa Anna is here with his main force.
Dickinson : Then what ?
Travis : Then Fannin will be here.
(West wall)
Bowie : More troops arriving every hour…
Crockett : Prettiest army I ever did see.
Bowie : Yeah… If I take my men out, will you go with me ?… Davy, you know this old mission can’t stand up in front of Santa Anna’s army, my way’s the only way !
Crockett : Travis says that Fannin’s coming.
Bowie : Travis says ! I wouldn’t take Travis’s word the night’s dark and day’s light !

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(In the yard)
Texan, to Smitty : Oh, just a minute, boy, I’ll give you ‘hand with that.
Smitty : No, I can swing it.
Texan : He’s a mighty willing boy.
Beekeeper : Yeah…
Texan : Fact the matter, it’s right neighborly all you Tennesseans to come down here ‘help us with this fight. ’Specially since it ain’t your. Why’d you do it ?
Beekeeper : We’re bored with women and drinking whiskey.
Texan 2 : Hey, you might get bored with bullets. You’ve seen all them soldiers outside the walls ? That’s only half. They say Santa Anna’s got seven thousand men.
Beekeeper, to Thimblerig : Gambler, maybe the odds are against us. Reck’ we ought’ send for help.
Thimblerig : Well, I can send for my brother.
Beekeeper : That'll make things even !
Texan : You Tennesseans talk so big you ought to move down here to Texas.
Beekeeper : You reckon Davy’s got us in a hollow log with the b’ar still in it ?
Thimblerig : Well, he ain’t dealed us a hand yet we couldn’ draw to.
Beekeeper : Sure…

(North wall)
Dickinson : Here comes Bowie, quarrel written all ov’r him.
Travis : I expected that. (To Bowie and Crockett Smile Gentlemen…
Bowie : Come dusk, I’m taking my men out of this trap.
Travis : And you, Crockett ?
Crockett : I’m… weighing the fors and the againsts…
Bowie : I’ll move at first dark.
Travis : If you go against my orders, you will be labeled a traitor.
Bowie, throwing his cigar away : Now let’s just us forget what I’ll be labeled. Do you personally put that name to me ? And you better think before you speak, you prissy jackass, ‘cause your life hangs on your answer !
Dickinson : Gentlemen, all this is insane. Colonel Bowie, think : Fannin is on his way with reinforcements.
Bowie : Is he ?
Travis : Fannin is coming. I give you my solemn word.
Bowie : Your word, huh ! I was just telling Crockett here ’I wouldn’t take your word that night’s dark and day’s light.
Dickinson : Colonel Bowie !…
Travis : Stop, Dick ! You could never apologize for that, colonel Bowie. I have no alternative but to ask you to…
Crockett : Man wearin' out a good horse coming over that hill.
Travis : It’s Jim Bonham. I sent him to Fannin ‘day before yesterday… Bowie, I think our private matter can wait a while.

(Dickinsons’ kitchen, beneath Travis’ office)
Susannah, to Bonham : I got stew on the hob. It will be warm in just a few minutes.
Bonham : I’d rather have it soon than hot !
Travis : Your report, Jim.
Bonham : Colonel Fannin’s first troop should cross the road of Diablo late tomorrow afternoon. I came through there and there’s water in it, but not enough to make trouble. I figure his first troops should be here by the afternoon of the third day from now — or by the latest the following morning.
Travis : Are you satisfied, Bowie ? Fannin is on his way with a thousand men. Or do you mistrust Jim Bonham’s word too ?
Bowie : Jim, I’ve known you since you’re a toe-headed boy. A thousand men — is that a guess, or a real figure ?
Bonham : Well, Colonel Fannin says a thousand.
Bowie : That’s good ’nough for me. I’ll wait. (Exit with Crockett.)
Travis : You’ve done splendidly, Jim. You better eat up and get some rest.
Bonham : I don’t feel good about this, Will. Colonel Bowie made me feel like a liar. When you sent me, you told me I was to come back with the word that Fannin had a thousand men, no matter how many men he actually had… And he’s only got about five-hundred.
Travis : Five-hundred ? Five-hundred… Well, we can make out for that. But a thousand ! Why, that sounds like a good round number ! After you get some sleep, I want you to get back to Fannin. Keep him coming as fast as he can ! Oh, uh, and you’ll need another horse. Use that fast bay mare of Dick’s. I can’t think of a better mount in all of Texas ! (Exit)
Susannah : Will is always so generous — to give away your horse without a regret !
Dickinson : Now…
Susannah : Don’t now me ! “You need a fresh horse, Jim. Take Dick’s !”
Dickinson : That’s enough…
Susannah : Will Travis thinks the Almighty nominated him and him alone to do the deciding and thinking for every human being on this earth !
Bonham : I’m beginning to think Sue’s got the right idea, Dick.]

(In the yard ; Beekeeper distributes whiskey out of his barrel, reciting counting rhymes)
Beekeeper : Blowing on a horn… That’s all !… Chicken in the bread pan, Pickin’ up the corn. That’s all ! Flies in the buttermilk, Shoo fly shoo. That’s all !… Ants on the sugar bowl, Two by two. That’s all !
Bull : I carried twiced as much.
Beekeeper : You’re twiced as big !
(The bell rings)
Sentry : Patrol’s in trouble !…
Lieutenant Finn, falling from his horse : Doggone it, Beekeeper ! I thought you wan’gon’op’ that corn liquor till nightfall ?
Beekeeper : What’s the matter with you ? ‘T’s only a half-hour to dark. Besides, it’s my keg, ain’t it ?
Finn : Well, alright. Give me some of that stuff ! I’m so scared I could drink all of it… Maybe I will !
Bowie : What’d you see, Irish ?
Finn : More than I wanted to, Jim. A lot of men arriving, and they got the darned, blastedest cannon I ever did see. Someth’ like this. (Drawing in the sand with his rifle’s butt) Twelve or fourteen foot long, maybe !
Bowie : He sure draws pretty, don’t he?
Crockett : Frightening ! Twelve or fourteen feet long — are you sure, Irish ?
Finn : Well, yeah…
Travis, from the gallery : Finn !
Finn : Yes, sir.
Travis : You were ordered to make a report to me, not to hold lecture courses. Get up here !
Finn : Alright, Will — uh, uh, Colonel Travis.
Beekeeper : Hey Travis ! With a cannon like that, them Santa Anna fellas can just sit up there and give us what for, can’t they ?
Travis : There’s no such cannon in the North American continent. But they have some in Europe, according to last reports. Acting Lieutenant Finn is exaggerating.
(Mexican lines)
Mexican officer : ¡ Fuego !
(The Alamo ; the cannon-ball falls in the middle of the yard)
Tennessean : She’s a big one, Davy, and she’s shooting from over here !
Travis : Battery one ! Is your gun ready ?
Server, on the chapel’s roof : We’re primed and ready, sir !
Travis : Give it full elevation !
Server : Yes, sir… The gun is ready, sir.
Travis : Fire !
Beekeeper : Kinda short there, Colonel Mister Travis !… (To the men) By jory, I’m sure glad I seen that there cannon sitting out there on that prairie. For a minute, I thought they’s shooting at ‘us from one of them old countries way over in Europe. (Thimblerig shows him what’s left of his keg, burning.) Oh ! my goodness ! No !… Oh, no, they wouldn’t dare ! Man, that ain’t no fair way to fight a war !
Bowie : Well, guess we’d better do somethin’ about that, Crockett.
Crockett : Plain as can be.
Bowie : About an hour after dark ?
Crockett : Good. Thimblerig ! Fifteen men, right after dark. All sober.

(At night ; above front gate)
Beekeeper : Boo !
Sentry : Halt !
Beekeeper : I lost the bet.
Sentry : Huh?
Beekeeper : I bet some my friends I could sneak up on you without you hearing me.
Sentry : Friend, you like to got a hole in your head… (He’s gagged)
Beekeeper : Ah ah !…
Bowie : Tie him loose.
Crockett : Kick that fire out, ‘n’ kill our silhouette.
Bowie : Let’s go !
Tennesseans : Company one, let’s go !… Come on…

(Later)
Travis : Everything set ?
Dickinson : Yes, sir.
Travis : Alright, it’s time, men. Open the gate !
Man : Colonel Travis, sentry here !
Sentry : Somebody jumped me. I’ll say they did ! Shoved me down, tied me up, and some of them stepped on me goin’ by, and never so much as a by-your-leave from every one of them !
Travis : Damn it !… Return to your posts.
Sentries : Yes, sir.
Travis : Close the gate ! (To Dickinson) Well, you’d better get your men mounted, then. See if you can give them any help.
Dickinson : Yes, sir… Detail ! Stand to horse !
(Mexican lines)
Tennesean 1, astride the cannon, half-voice : Get the powder !…
Crockett : Where’s the mud ?
Tennessean 2 : Oh, it’s coming. Here it is…
(Mud-loaded cannon blows up)
Mexican 1 : ¿ Que es ?
Mexican 2 : ¡ Es un cañon!
Bowie : Clear out ! I’ll cover !
Crockett : You heard the man !
(Men shouting in Spanish)
Bowie : Come on, kid. Get out of here !
Smitty : I can shoot… (Bowie fires his six-barreled rifle.) Golly ! What a gun !
Bowie : Go on ! Grab a horse !
(The Alamo)
Travis, from the courtyard : Cannon party ! No one will fire until you can identify your target !
Finn : Yes, sir.
Dickinson, riding : Let’s give’em a hand, boys. Knock on it ! Hey ! (Gunfire) Pick’em up ! Pick’em up ! Everybody rides double. Come on ! Pick’em up !
(Explosions & gunfire ; Bowie’s horse neighs & falls)
Smitty : Hold the gate ! Hold the gate !
Sentry : Somebody’s still on the outside !
(Gunfire continues)
Crockett : Close the gate ! Good work, Smitty !… We never missed you, Jim. It’s a good thing the kid did.
Bowie : Oh, th’ horse folded with me.
Man : You alright, Jim?
Bowie : Yeah, sure of.
Melinda : Oh, Mr. Smith, you’ve been hurt !
Smitty : Oh, it’s alright.
Beekeeper : Let’s take a look at that.
Smitty : I said it’s alright.
Crockett, calling : Doctor !
Beekeeper : Mm… No bone’s broken. All you need is a little Doctor Beekeeper’s fix'em on it. (He pours whiskey on Smitty’s arm.)
Smitty, to Melinda : See, I… (He passes out)

(Dickinsons’ veranda, corner of Travis’ quarters & chapel yard)
Dickinson, embracing Susannah, to Travis : Pretty close.
Travis : Bowie ?
Dickinson : Oh, he’s alright. Turned a horse over.
Travis : Jethro !
Jethro : Yes, sir.
Travis : Tell Colonel Bowie I wish to speak to him at once.
Jethro : Yes, sir.
Travis : Over here, where we can have a little privacy.
Jethro : Yes, sir.
(He enters next door the ancient convent, now a stable.)
Travis : Post this area !
Man : Yes, sir !
Dickinson : Will, considering the way things turned out, I…
Travis : Leave this to me !
(Foot steps ; Bowie, Crockett & Jethro come in)
Travis : Col’nel Bowie, I have had just about enough insubordination.
Bowie : You have ? Alright, let’s get to it. When and where ? I hear you’re a good shot, so let us choose pistols.
Travis : I had assumed you would have chosen the ruffian’s knife.
Dickinson : Gentlemen, I beg…
Travis : Dick ! Act for me.
Dick : Time ?
Crockett : I suggest after this war is over.
Travis : Yes. The minute, the very minute this war is over.
Dick : Jim ?
Bowie : That’s fine with me.
Travis : One last word, Bowie ! This evening’s episode… By going on a mission without orders, you endangered this command. If it had not been for the fortunate intervention of Captain Dickinson and his patrol, a large number of badly needed volunteers would now be dead out there instead of at their post in here. I demand your word of honor that there will be no repetition of such conduct. Otherwise, I shall be forced to order your arrest.
Bowie : Travis… Don’t you worry anymore about arrest or insubordination. I take my people out at daybreak. (Exit)
Jethro : Col’nel Travis, I’m an old man. But you’re wrong. (Exit too)
Crockett : That Jethro ! Reminds me of a story…
Travis : Please, Crockett ! No homespun wisdom. No cracker-barrel philosophy. None of the backwoods wit for which you are famous. Good night.
Crockett : You’ better slack off of me, mister. This code of honor business doesn’t bother me a bit. When there’s trouble, I come from any direction as sudden and as surprising as I can. My only concern here is twenty-three Tennesseans. So you’ better let me know what’s in your mind.
Travis : I’d have thought that would have been obvious to you. (He draws his saber) It’s as simple as this. (Sketching in the sand) There’s Santa Anna with seven thousand men (a cross). Up here (a line) is the Sabine river . Somewhere around here (a cross above the line), Sam Houston is trying to organize an army. And right in between (driving his saber between the upper cross & the line) is the Alamo. [Music : Ballad coda.] Santa Anna can’t go around and leave a fort along his lines of communication. He must reduce the Alamo by storm. Every minute of time we buy for Sam Houston is another precious minute in the life of Texas. And Crockett, nobody’s ever going to say that William Barrett Travis did not buy every minute possible.
Crockett : Makes sense. Why ain’t you tell Bowie that ?
Travis : Because a commander does not have to explain his every decision.
Crockett : ’Explained to me.
Travis : I have great respect for you, Crockett. But I have none for that knife-fighting adventurer.
Crockett : I figured any fella that shouldered a gun was deserving of respect. But, then I’m not… a real soldier. I never fought anybody but Injuns… less’n you count the British.
Travis : Crockett… I must ask you to forgive my rudeness earlier on to you.
Crockett : I’m an easy forgiver… at times. ‘Night, Travis. (He walks to a campfire where Tenneseans are assembled.) Crack out a couple of jugs and bring that guitar.
Beekeeper : What are we gonna do, Davy ?
Crockett : Serenade. (He knocks at Bowie’s door)
Bowie : Well ! I hope you told that long-winded idiot what you think of him.
Crockett : Oh, I’m not rightly sure what I think of him.
Bowie, spotting the Tennesseans : What’s all this ?
Crockett : Well, I figured we’d crack a jug and tell each other our troubles.
Bowie : Now, wait a minute, Crockett. Don’t try your winnin’ ways on me, my mind’s made up !
Crockett : Well, we can have a farewell drink.
Bowie : You mean you’re stayin’ ?
Crockett : That’s what I figure, Jim.
Bowie : Alright, we’ll have a drink or two or ten. But you ain’t gonna get me drunk and change my mind.
Crockett : Of course not !…

(Next morning ; men snoring under a wooden cover.)
Sergeant Lightfoot : Water patrol, let’s go. Rise and shine ! Up and at’em !… Beekeeper, come on, show a leg ! Get out of there ! Thimblerig, come on, it’s your duty.
Bull : Shut up ! You don’t have to wake us all.
Parson : I’ll get’em up, Sergeant.
Lightfoot : Thanks, Parson, thanks.
Thimblerig : Hey, Bob. Two dollars American, if you take out my patrol.
Bob : Two dollars ? This morning, I wouldn’t take your patrol for ten.
Scottish : I would !
Thimblerig : Got yourself a deal, Scotty.
Parson : Well, Davy, it looks like you’ve done it again.
Crockett : It do… Bowie ?
Parson : Looked like a tie to me.
Beekeeper : Your duty…
Crockett, drinking water out of a ladle : Ah ! (He takes the bucket to Bowie’s quarters.)
Jethro : Good morning, Col’nel. He’s still sleeping.
Crockett : I’ll take care of that, Jethro. (He throws the bucket of water from the doorway and crosses the yard.)
Bowie, from inside : Aaagh ! Hey ! (Kicks the bucket on the doorstep and hurts his toes) Ow !… Crockett ! Crockett ! (In the infirmary) Crockett, what the devil…
Crockett : Good morning, Smitty. Doc…
Doctor : Davy…
Smitty : Good morning !
Crockett : Well ! You got yourself famous last night. Now every place they talk about Jim Bowie, they’ll have to tell about the good man that pulled him out from under the troops.
Smitty : Gee ! Will they ?
Crockett : Jim, the kid always wanted to know about that sand-bar episode.
Bowie, drying his shirt : Oh ! Come on, Crockett…
Crockett : That’s the truth, he’s never heard anything but hearsay.
Smitty : Gosh yes, Mister Bowie ! And all the fellows back home talk about that…
Crockett, at the door : By the way, Smitty… Say goodbye to Jim. (Exit)
Smitty : ‘You going someplace, Col’nel… Jim ?
Bowie : No… No, I’m not… goin’ no place, that’s just Crockett’s idea of a joke. Now you get well, Smitty, boy. And thanks for your help. (Outside ; he kicks-ass a man loading a horse) Now, what are you doin’?
Bowie’s Man : Well, it was rumored we were leaving this morning.
Bowie : I’ll tell you when we’re leaving. Get that gear put away !… Crockett ! (Makes a sign to follow him & precede him into his room, then punches him on the chin.)
Crockett, from the bed : By God, Bowie ! You’re bad-tempered.
Bowie : Now, don’t you ever try to make a fool out of me again !
Crockett : Once is enough…
Crockett : I make up my own mind.
Crockett : Never thought otherwise, Jim. I was wondering… You think there’d be a mouthful of that corn juice left ? We could kinda cut the tar out of our throats.
Bowie : That’s a great idea, Davy. That’s a great idea…
Crockett : I still say you’re bad-tempered.

[Uncut version : (01:58:59)
(The patrol, near a river)
Dickinson : Cattle… Texas cattle.
Beekeeper : Man, that looks like a lot of good eating meat !
Dickinson : There’s a lot of men to eat’em too… We’re going back !
(Mexican cavalry spots them. Music : Mexican theme.)
Dickinson : Run for it ! Let’s get out of here.
(Two men fall.
At the Alamo ; Jocko blows his horn)
Sentry : Patrol’s under fire !
(Wounded’s carried on a stretcher)
Doctor : Get him to the infirmary ! Alright now, easy, men… Handle him gently. Let’s go…
Dickinson : We lost two men, Colonel. We got trapped between a patrol of Dragons and a patrol of Lancers.
Thimblerig : Scotty ?
Beekeeper : He was one of them.
Dickinson : And Losoya.
Travis : Losoya ?… Sergeant Lightfoot !
Lighfoot : Sir ?
Travis : You will inform his… (Spotting two Mexican women in the arms of Susannah Smile That will not be necessary, Sergeant.
Lightfoot : Yes, Sir.
Travis : Señora Losoya, you have the heartfelt sympathy of every soul within these walls… (To Dickinson Smile There will be no more patrols. We can see everything we need to, from right here.

(At night)
Sentry : Corporal of guard, post number one ! Corporal of guard, post number one !
Corporal : Detail !
Bowie : What is it ?
Sentry : There’s many of men moving out there, sir.
Corporal : Who’s out there ? Speak up or duck !
Voice outside : It is Juan Seguin. I seek Jim Bowie.
Bowie : Open the gate !
Sentry : But Colonel Travis, he said…
Bowie : Oh, Bob, shut up ! Come on and open that gate !… Don Juan !
Seguin : Jim…
Bowie : Silverio !
Silverio : Señor Bowie…
Bowie : Howdy !
Third Mexican : ¡ Señor Bowie, tanto gusto !
Seguin : We came for you to command us, Jim.
Bowie : Good.
Seguin : Dozens more wanted to come with us, but I would take only well-armed men ‘n’ few had rifles.
Bowie : Uh uh.
Seguin : We have some men from Gonzales here, we picked’em up on our way. This is Señor…
Bowie : I’ve known these old rascals for years ! How are you, Hap ?
Hap : Hi, Jim.
Bowie : George… ‘Thought you’d help us out, huh ?
George : From the looks of that army we came through, you can use all the help you can get.
Bowie : Yeah, seems like. But’s only fair to tell you boys, I may decide to take my men out of here tomorrow. You might find yourselves fighting up north, long ‘way from home.
Seguin : You command us, Jim. If you command us to go north, we’ll go north.
Bowie : Good.
Travis, from the gallery : Welcome, Señor Seguin ! There will be plenty of work for you and your brave men.
Seguin : Thank you, Colonel Travis. (Exit Travis)
Bowie : Well, that double-crosser ! Just when you expect an argument, he agrees with you !… Come on, Juan. I’ll help your people find a bivouac.
Seguin : Okay, Jim.

(At day. A chocolate cake “Lisa Angelina Dickinson.”)
Tennesseans choir :
Happy birthday to you !
Happy birthday to you !
Happy birthday, dear Lisa !
Happy birthday to you !
Thimblerig : What day is this ?
Lisa : This’s my birthday today, and I have cake for everybody !
Thimblerig : Our darling Lisa, from the bottom’ of our hearts, we wish you a happy birthday. And… (Tennesseans unmask a wooden cradle) our present !
Lisa : My first real bed ! (She gets in it)
Dickinson : It’s a beautiful present, Lisa.
Lisa : Sing me our song, Daddy.
Dickinson : Oh, no honey ! Not here in front of everybody, that’s our own private little song.
Lisa : But you always sing to me when I’m in bed, Daddy…
Dickinson, kneeling down :
Tennessee babe with a sweet sounding name,
Dear little rose of the south,
You are so sweet that the neighbors all claim
Sugar won’t melt in your mouth.
(With Susannah, kneeling in turn Smile
Oh Lisa, our Lisa !
Dear little rose of the south…
Oh Lisa, sweet Lisa !
Sugar won’t melt in your mouth !

Lisa : We are three together.
Dickinson : Always, sweetheart, always.
Beekeeper : Young lady, I think that every girl should dance on her birthday. And may l have the honor of the first, uh ?… Mr. fiddler ! Strike us up a tune !
Smitty :
Here’s to the ladies ! I love them all,
Here’s to the ones I recall…
Here’s to the ladies, married or free,
They all look pretty good to me !

The big and small ones,
The short and tall ones…
Each one a lovely Valentine !…

(On the rampart)
Crockett : They’ve forgot what’s out there. (Here’s to the ladies, I love the ladies…) Doesn’t take much to make folks happy : (Oh, how I wish they all were mine !) a little music, food and drink… (The fat and lean ones, The in-between ones…) a baby smiling ‘cause it’s her birthday.
Smitty : From seventeen to eighty-nine…Well ! Here’s to the ladies…
Bowie : My youngest is just that one’s size…
Smitty : I love the ladies, Oh, how I wish they all were mine ! All mine ! All mine !
Crockett, looking at Mexicans : They’re building up…]

(At night — front gate)
Voice outdoors : ¡ Amigo !
Sentry : Halt ! Who goes there ?
Voice : Don’t shoot, amigo ! A message for Jim Bowie. In the sombrero. (Noise of a horse galloping)
Sentry : Jim, fellow says there’s a message in this hat for you. (He throws down the sombrero.)
Bowie, near the campfire : Huh ! Kind of a strange way to be sending messages, ain’t it ?
Crockett : Yeah. Maybe Santa Anna has surrendered… (Bowie laughs, reads, stops laughing and goes away ; Crockett joins him.) What is it, Jim ?
Bowie : I never… knew the night could be so dark. My… my wife. She… she’s… dead.
Crockett : I lived through it, Jim… It’s hard.
Bowie : It was the plague… The damn plague ! (sobs) Oh, God ! Dear God !… Oh, Davy… She was so small… So tiny, so very tiny… She wanted to stay In Bexar to be near me, but I made her go to Coahuila. I made her go !…
Crockett : My man Parson… He’s kind of a preacher. He keeps sayin’… little do we mortals know… Hold your head up, Jim.
Travis : Colonel Bowie ! You’ve had a communication from outside these walls. This is against my orders. What information have you received ? Bowie, hand me that letter !
Bowie : You may die tonight…
Crockett, softly : The little lady, Jim. She won’t like it.
Travis, having read : Colonel Bowie… Please accept my most profound sympathy, and my regret for having disturbed you at such a moment. This in no way impairs your right to call me on the field of honor at a later date. (Handing back the letter Smile But I wish to express my sorrow for you, and present my apology for being such a boor at such a time.
Bowie : Travis… you can’t help bein’ you… and I can’t help bein’ me.

(Next day. Bugle call. Flag’s lifted)
Crockett : What’s that all about, Sergeant ?
Lightfoot : Thirty-two cases hospitalized this morning, sir.
Crockett : Well, tell them to move over, after last night’s party, it ain’t…
Lightfoot : Oh, no sir. Women and children.
Crockett, to Bowie : Another officer’s call.
[Music : Ballad coda]
(In the warehouse)
Doctor, to Travis smelling meat : See for yourself, it’s all like that…
Crockett : Sir…
Travis : Gentlemen… Doctor ?
Doctor : It’s as simple as this, gentlemen. I had thirty-two cases of mild dysentery this morning. I tested the salt pork barrel — the ration we issued from : it’s tainted. So is every other barrel in the warehouse.
Travis : Sergeant ?
Sergeant : Barring the pork, I figure’ we have three or four days’ full rations to serve to the garrison.
Travis : You see the dilemma, gentlemen. We’re almost out of food. However, Santa Anna does not suffer under the same handicap. Therefore, our course is obvious. If you’ll follow me…

(At night. Santa Anna’s camp. Mexican music & dance : “Vuelve el Gitano, vuelve…” “¡ Olé !”)
Beekeeper, walkin’ in the river : I can think of more comfortable places to watch that show from.
Bowie, whispering : Quiet !
(The Alamo)
Travis : Dick !
Dickinson : Yes, sir.
Travis : It’s a half-hour to daybreak. Have your men stand to horse.
Dickinson : Yes, Sir.
(Mexican side. Sentries on a bridge are killed. Cattle is mooing. Music : Raid for cattle)
Crockett : The night herders. Two to each one of’em. Don’t miss… there’ll be a lot of hungry kids. Get’em !
Bowie : Smitty !… (To one of his men Smile Grab a horse off that picket line for Smitty. Get a good one.
Crockett : Colonel Davy… Can I ask you fellas something, face to face ?
Crockett : Sure thing, kid.
Smitty : ‘You really sending me because I’m such a good horseman, like you said ?
Crockett : As I live and breathe ! You are smarter than Beekeeper, and can swim better than the gambler.
Crockett : It ain’t because you don’t think I’d be worth my salt when the fighting starts ?
Bowie : Smitty, let me tell you something. Of all the men in this outfit, I’d pick you to side me if the goin’ was rough.
Crockett : You see ?
Smitty : Gee !
Crockett : Get on this horse. Now, there’s nothing out there kid, but dark.
Bowie : Good luck, Smitty. (The boy gallops away.) It’ll take him quite a few days to get to Houston.
Crockett : So I figured…
Thimblerig : South side’s all taken care of.
Crockett : Get a horse.
Bowie : Now, all we can do is wait.
Crockett : That’s the hardest part.
Bowie : It sure is.
(The Alamo)
Dickinson, softly : Column halt !
Travis : Carry on, Dick, and good luck.
Dickinson : Thank you, Will.
Finn : Best of luck, Dickinson.
Dickinson, softly : Forward. Yo-ho !
(Mexican lines at daybreak)
Crockett : If they don’t shoot pretty quick, we’ve got to go anyway.
(Gunfire. Shouting in Spanish.)
Crockett : Let’s take’em ! (Cattle is driven through Bexar to the fort)
Finn : Hold your fire ! Hold your fire ! Pick your targets… Fire ! Fire at will !
Travis : Second rank… Fire ! Fall back. Fire ! Fall back. Fire ! Fall back. (Cattle enters the fort) Second rank… Fire ! Fall back. Third rank… Ready ? Fire ! Cease fire ! (Staying out last, he calmly shoots a cavalryman galloping right onto him.) Close the gate !
Crockett : There’s one thing for sure, he’s a bearcat for nerve.
Bowie : I’m grateful for that. I’d hate to look at a coward over a duellin’ pistol.
Crockett : You’re not much for this forgive and forget business, are you, Jim ?
Bowie : No.
(Shots of Texas cattle within the paddock)
Crockett : Beef for supper !
Bowie : Yes, sir.

Part 3 (and final part) to follow
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Re: The Script

Postby NefariousNed on Mon Sep 29, 2008 3:26 pm

Keep 'em coming, Alamo John!

Say, I always thought it was "Dr. Beekeeper's fix-em" that Chill poured on Frankie Avalon's arm. Here, it says "fix-all". What did everyone else hear?
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Re: The Script

Postby Seguin on Tue Sep 30, 2008 2:41 am

Beekeeper : I ain’t never been run outta no place… Except the time my old paw kicked me over every acr’of th’half-rig section back in Ohio. But I was just a shirt-tail kid then — ‘n’ my paw had big feet.


What´s "every acr´of th´half-rig section"? - I guess "acr´" means acre, but what´s "half-rig section"?
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Re: The Script

Postby Alamo John UK on Tue Sep 30, 2008 4:44 pm

OK Guys are you ready for more confusing dialogue ?

3RD AND FINAL PART....

(Before a barbecue)
Bull, roasting : Hog never rightly could pass for meat — but beef !…
(Pete burns his hands in reaching for a rib.)
Bowie : Davy ! Santa Anna ! The big he-bull himself !
Crockett : Let’s go !
Travis : Ladies to cover ! Men to your posts !… Captain Dickinson !
Dickinson : Yes, sir.
Travis : Order all men fed in relays. Full issue of ammunition.
Dickinson : Yes, sir.
“It do” : That’s the best-dressed army I ever saw.
Bull : Fancy clothes don’t make a fightin’ man.
Bob : They’re just off two years puttin’ down revolts. They’re fightin’ men.
(Outside front gate)
Teniente Rodriguez, reading : “Generalìssimo Santa Anna has just arrived with the main body of his army and has only now become aware that there are women and children in the mission. He wishes that the ladies receive his apologizes and be informed his forces can never attack a position without the enemy being given the opportunity to evacuate women and children. [Music : Degüello] According, you have one hour in which to evacuate these noncombatants, who will be provided with transport to proceed to such destination as is their choice. Signed : Antonio López de Santa Anna, ruler of Mexico.” Your answer ?
Travis : My compliments to the general for his gallantry. We will evacuate our noncombatants. (Mexicans gallop away.) Single men will remain at their posts ! Married men will arrange transport for their families !


(Dickinsons’ door-step – Music : Green Leaves of Summer.)
Travis : Sue, you’d better hurry.
Dickison : She won’t go.
Susannah : Save your breath, Will — your ever so persuasive breath.
Dickinson, to Travis : Alright, say it : it’s a sorry man that can’t make his wife obey.
Travis : You seem to forget, Dick, that I am too married. [Music : Tennessee Babe.]
Susannah, to her husband : I’ve got to do what I think is the right thing. I’m a soldier’s wife. My child is a soldier’s child. (To Travis Smile We’ll stay.
Travis : Very well, Sue. Dick…
Susannah, to Dick : Don’t be angry with me.
Dickinson : I’m not angry. I’m proud.
(Travis joins Crockett & Bowie on the front gate’s stairway.)
Travis : Dick, take your patrol.
Dickinson : Yes, sir.
Travis : Married men, return to your posts ! Open the gate ! Captain Dickinson !…
Dickinson : Escort ! Forward ! Yo-ho !
[Music : Green leaves of Summer]
Finn, to a woman on a cart : Ma’am, I ain’t got no woman to say goodbye to. Could I tell you goodbye ?
The woman, handing her hand : Surely.
Old woman driving the cart : Get up boy ! Yah !
Another old woman at the reins of another cart : Jocko, Nell, it’s time.
Nell : Go on, Jocko. Do the best you can.
Jocko, looking at his departing blind wife & their children : I can’t… I can’t. I just can’t do it, fellas.
Travis : Colonel Bowie, this is a request and not an order. But I suggest that as desperate as our needs are, that family’s needs are more desperate.
Bowie : Get in that line, Jocko, and move out with your people.
Jocko : You can see how it is. It’s more than a man can bear. She’s never said a word of pity for herself
in the ten years she’s been blind…
Nell, coming behind him : Will Travis ! Just who do you think you are ?
Travis : Mrs. Robertson, I can assure you that no blame will attach itself to your husband.
Bowie : Get moving, Jocko, or I’ll help you along with the toe of my boot.
Nell : Shut up, Jim Bowie ! And you and Travis listen close. My man ain’t goin’ out ! He’s just as much a man as either one of you, and maybe more ! In spite of he ain’t rich like you, Jim, or fancy educated like you, Will Travis. Now, Jocko, you get back up on that wall, ‘cause you’re just as good as any man that ever trod leather, and it’s your right ! And I can’t see, but I’m just as good as any woman in Texas, and it’s my right to go and leave you. Now we’ve cuddled nice and… said all our goodbyes but… I’ll say it again. We’d be fools not to face it : you’re likely to go and get yourself killed in this battle and… I don’t know what you’re going to say going through the gates of heaven, but I’m gonna say that no woman ever lived had herself a better husband than you’ve been to me. Now go on !
(Cart departs. Spontaneous triple cheer. Music : Green Leaves of Summer, accordion & guitar.)

Travis : Captain Dickinson.
Dickinson, coming back with his escort : Yes, sir.
Travis : Have the doctor set up the hospital in the chapel. You will personally take charge of battery number four.
Travis : Yes, sir.
(Mexican lines. Officers shout orders in Spanish : “¡ Clarines ! ¡ Suenen al ataque !… ¡ Adalante !…”)
Crockett, at South-east palisade : Hold your fire… Hold your fire… Take’em ! (On the front gate, to Bowie Smile Straight frontal attackin’.
Bowie : We need more men up here ! I’ll get some strength from Dickinson… North wall ! Hurry it up.
(South wall – as Parson bears buckets of water for the cannons, he falls with a low-barrack.)
Bowie, to Bull & Beekeeper trying to help Parson out of the stones : Who ?
Beekeeper : It’s the parson.
(Bull takes Parson in his arms ; Bowie, wounded at a leg, leans on Beekeeper)
Mexican officer : ¡ Clarines ! ¡ Suenen al retiro !
Crockett : Hold your fire !
Finn : Hold your fire ! They’re retirin’ !
Crockett, to Thimblerig : See did any of our boys get hurt. I’ll be below getting washed on the outside and wet down inside.
[Uncut version : 02:35:53
Beekeeper : Davy, it’s the parson.]
Dickinson : We’ve been lucky today.
Travis : Check for damage. Officers’ call in ten minutes.
(Nave of the chapel, turned into operating room. Susannah brings a bucket of water)
Doctor : Bring on another. (He throws the water on the table)
[Uncut version : (02:36:34 )
(South transept)
The parson : Boys… Davy…
Crockett : Laying here to get out of your share of the work, are you, old man ?
Parson : I’m glad you’ come, Davy. I wanted to thank you. From the bottom of my heart, I wanted to thank you.
Crockett : Thank me ?
Parson : Davy, I’ve seen the world because of you.[Music : Green Leaves of Summer.] Seventy years, I lived in a small settlement, and then you brung me here to see a far country. I always wanted to travel, Davy, but I had to stay home. There was always a child to raise, and it was like a divine gift when you said : “Come along if you want to, old man, but don’t do any praying over me.” That’s what you said, Davy. Remember ?
Crockett : I remember.
Parson : That’s all, Davy. I wanted you to know I was grateful. (He dies as music ends. Tennesseans stand up.)
Crockett, taking off his cap & looking at the sky : We haven’t had many conversation, Sir. Only time I’ve ever called on you is… when I wanted something — when I was in a tight, like a little boy hollering for his Pa. And now, I want something again. I brought these men down here, without asking them did they want a piece of this war. It’s a failing of mine — deciding for others. So if you can find a clear to let these men live through this battle, I’ll be forever thankful. But if your stick don’t float that way, please to remember, Sir, these are good men. All !]

[Music : Green Leaves of Summer]
(Outside the fort, Mexican women cry over their dead.)
Wounded soldiers : ¡ Agua !
(On the ramparts)
Bob : Sure killed many a brave men today.
Thimblerig : It’s funny, I was proud of’em. Even while I was killin’em, I was proud of’em. Speaks well for men that so many ain’t afraid to die ‘cause they think right’s on their side. Speaks well.
(Dickinsons’ veranda.)
Travis : Post this area, Lightfoot.
Lightfoot : No point, it’s already done.
Travis : Alright, sergeant. (To Dickinson Smile Report.
Dickinson : Fifty casualties : twenty-eight dead, twenty-two wounded. Morale : high.
Bowie, while Doctor ties a rifle to his leg : Well morale ain’t gonna help us much if Fannin don’t get here, and quick. Ow ! Doc !
Doctor : Quit squawking. You ought to be laying on your back. You’ll never walk.
Crockett : Santa Anna didn’t have much respect for us, today, and he got burned.
Bowie : And now he’s gonna be comin’ at us with a battle plan from all four sides. We already been cut down by a third. Just how long do you think we can hold out ?
Travis : Santa Anna won’t attack again today. He’ll clear the field of all the dead and wounded. We know that Fannin will be here by tomorrow, even without a forced march. With his five-hundred men, we can hold this fort for at least a month.
Bowie : Five-hundred ? I thought it was a thousand ?
Travis : Five-hundred !
Man : Bonham’s approaching, sir.
Travis : Good. Fannin should be close behind. (To Bonham drinking out of a pitcher Smile Well ?
Bonham : Colonel Fannin isn’t comin’. His men were ambushed. Murdered ! (He throws the ladle away.) There won’t be any help.
Travis : Have all volunteers assembled in the compound.
Bowie, to Crockett : Well, that’s it. I’m taking my men out, cut through to the north. ‘You coming ?
Crockett : Seems like the better part of valor.

Travis, down in the courtyard : Men… Jim Bonham has brought news as sad as death. Col’nel Fannin has been ambushed. We can expect no help. I stay here with my command. But any of you who wish to, may leave with all honor. Failing reinforcements, the Alamo cannot hold. But do not go with heads hung low. No man could criticize your behavior. Here on these ramparts, you’ve bought a priceless ten days of time for Houston. You have bled the enemy army. You are brave and noble soldiers. Open the gate ! May God bless you. ([Music : Ballad coda] Bowie starts to the gate – then turns the reins to his left, steps down his horse and limps silently to Travis, followed by Jethro [Silence], then all of his men. Crockett awaits for his Tennesseans decision. Beekeeper dismount first, then the Gambler [Music : Tennesseans theme.] Crockett is the last to join Travis, & all the men behind the three leaders seem ready to start the coming battle .) Close the gate !

(Smitty rides across a river)
Sentry : Hold up there, bub ! You get into dangerous territory. Where you heading ?
Smitty : I’m looking for General Sam Houston. Got a message for him.
Sentry 2 : Well, you’ve come to the right place. Corp’ of the guard ! Post number three !
Corporal : What is it ?
Sentry 1 : He wants to see General Sam.
Corporal : Come on, bub. (Houston headquarters. To Neill Smile The lad has a message for the General.
Smitty : Yes, sir.
Neill : Well, you’d better get down, son. And get yourself some frijole beans and a little sleep.
Smitty : No, sir. I’ve gotta get back to the Alamo ! (He gallops away.)
Houston, having read : Yesterday, I read you Colonel Fannin’s message telling us he cannot reach the Alamo in time. Today, I have this !… (he crumples the paper) from the Alamo. They are surrounded. And we can’t help them. Now, tomorrow, when your recruits start to whine and bellyache, [Music : Ballad coda.] you tell them… that a hundred and eighty-five of their friends… neighbors… fellow Texicans, are hold up in a crumbling adobe church down on the Rio Bravo , buying them this precious time. I hope they remember. I hope Texas remembers…
[Music : Green Leaves of Summer, introduction.]
(The Alamo – Travis & “Happy Sam”, his little black servant, help Dick & Sue moving to the sacristy.)
Choirs in the background :
A time to be reapin’, a time to be sowin’
The green leaves of summer are callin’ me home
It was good to be young then, in the season of plenty
When the catfish were jumping as high as the sky…
(In the sacristy. Dickinson puts Lisa to bed. In the nave Smile
Travis, to Susannah : It may not be as comfortable, but it’s safer in here. (As she looks at the doctor asleep on his operating table Smile He’s had a hard day.
(A time to be laughin’, a time to be livin’…)
Susannah : Will, I’m sorry.
Travis : What for ?
Susannah : I guess I’ve said some pretty rude things to you… at least, I thought’em.
(A time to be courtin’ a girl of your own…)
Travis : You’re a wonderful woman, Sue. Forget it… (Twas so good to be young then, to be close to the earth …)
Dick, stay here as long as you can. ‘Probably won’t need you till morning.
(…And to stand by your wife at the moment of birth.)
Susannah, to Dick : I’ve only added to your worries, haven’t I ? I know I must be very selfish but… I couldn’t think of facing the world without you. (She falls in his arms.)

(Sam, a paper crown from Lisa’s birthday on his head, puts a paper hat on her bed.)
A time to be reapin’, a time to be sowin’,
The green leaves of summer are ‘callin’ me home
[‘Twas so good to be young then, with the sweet smell of apples
And the owl in the pine-tree, a-winkin’ his eye…
(Shots of men sitting up.)
A time just for plantin’, a time to be ploughin’,
A time just for livin’, a place for to die,]
‘Twas so good to be young then, to be close to the earth,
Now the green leaves of summer are callin’ me home…
(Up on West wall Smile
Thimblerig : What are you thinking, Davy ?
Crockett : not thinkin’. Just rememberin’.
(Below, around a campfire.)
Beekeeper : Well, I sure done a heap of things I shouldnv’ done. Seemed urgent at the moment… Got myself a heap of sins to answer for. Wish it weren’t that biga… I reckon old Saint Pete’s gonna come and slam them Pearly Gates right smack-dab in my face.
The Atheist : There ain’t no Pearly Gates. When you’re dead, you’re meat for the worms, that’s all there is to it.
Beekeeper : You mean you don’t believe in no afterlife, no hereafter ?…
The Atheist : Tales for children. Bunkum and bosh !.
[Uncut version : (02:52:14)
The Fanatic, standing up & brandishing a stick : ‘Man could get himself tarred and feathered for sayin’ that back where I come from ! I’ll have you to know that I’m a fully immersed member of the first church of King’s Crossing. Don’t come on beein’ King’s creek cause the Jordan wasn’ nearby. And I believe in hell firing brimstone and the Pearly Gates and the cloud and harp for them has lived good, and Hell and Purgatory for them that ain’t, and I can whip the man that says there ain’t no hereafter !
Bob : Friend, I think you said about enough, because this here’s a high-class discussion… if discussion means what I think it do ?
“It do” : It do.
Bull : Yeah, it do.
Bob : And I think you’d better sit down, cause there ain’t gonna be no fighting — just discussing.]
Jocko : I say this : I believe. I can never find a way to argue down you that don’t believe, but I believe in the Lord God Almighty, all knowing and all forgiving. [Music.] And I believe that Good shall be triumphant in the end and that evil shall be vanquished. I believe in a hereafter.
Bob : Me, too. I figure a man’s got to believe in those things, does he want to believe in the good things about man — about his very own self — [Green Leaves…] the real good things, like courage, honesty… and love.
(Travis is listening thoughtfully to that “rabble”.)

Bowie, writing outside his quarters : Jethro !
Jethro : Yes, sir.
Bowie : This is somethin’ I promised Mrs. Bowie. ‘Know what it is ?
Jethro : No, sir.
Bowie : That’s your freedom. You’re a free man, Jeth.
Jethro : Thank you, sir.
Bowie : You’d better get your belongings together and get on over the wall tonight. It’s gonna be more than a little rough around here. [Music : Degüello.] Good luck, Jeth. (Shake-hands)
Jethro : Thank you, sir… Colonel Bowie, you say I’m a free man ?
Bowie : That’s right.
Jethro : Well, if I’m free, then I got a right to decide what I’m gonna do — seems to me that’s what you men are fightin’ for. So, I… reckon I’ll… I’ll stay.

(In the morning. All the Alamo men are in battle position. Drum’s rolling outside.)
Sentry : Look !
(Shots of Mexican troops. Drums rolling continues. As Santa Anna appears on his horse, Degüello starts.)
Travis : Gentlemen, good luck. Get to your battle stations.

(Santa Anna rides to a hill, west of the compound. Drum rolling stops. Complete silence, except for the flags in the wind.)
Bob : What’s that ?… It’s sure loud.

(Santa Anna lift his hand. First cannon shots. Music : Final assault)
Mexican officers : ¡ Ala Carga!… ¡ Ala Carga !… ¡ Adelante !… ¡ Adelante !… ¡ Fuego !…

(Fort is attacked from all four sides.
At south-east palisade, Bowie is wounded.)
Crockett : Get Bowie out of here ! Get him into the chapel !
Man : Yes, sir.
Bowie : I’m alright.
Man, carrying Bowie : Hold still, Colonel Bowie.
Bowie : I said I’m alright !
Man : Colonel Crockett says…
Bowie : Don’t start that again !

(Thimblerig falls from the roof of the long barracks to Dickinsons’ veranda, where he lays dead when it crumbles in turn.)

(North wall – Lieutenant Finn falls from the rampart, a sabre in the belly and a Mexican under each arm.)
Travis, at north-west corner : Battery number three ! Come on !
Dickinson, to a wounded : Get to the infirmary !
Travis : Fire !
(North wall comes down. Travis gets out his sabre and goes at the Mexicans, killing several of them. When he gets shot in the side of his stomach, he breaks his sabre on his knee & throws parts to the Mexicans before he dies.
Dickinson clutches his chest and falls over the parapet where he stays dangling.)

(South-east, “Tennesseans” palisade Smile
A man, dying on a cannon : Crockett !… Crockett !… North wall…
Crockett : Half of you men. Throw up a barricade here ! Throw up a barricade ! (To Beekeeper, showing front gate Smile You stay up on that wall !

(Centre of the courtyard - Lieutenant Bonham fires his pistol to a horseman and waves his sabre at another, then he’s tramped by the cavalry and lays on the ground, a saber in the chest.
Crockett gets on the flagpole mound & knocks over a charging horse. )

(Beekeeper, fighting upon front gate with the butt of his rifle, gets a saber in his back.
Bob falls near “It do”, who sits wounded against a wall.)
Bob : Do this mean what I think it do ?
“It do” : It do.
(Bob dies, and bayonets approach “It do”, a defiant look on his face.
Beekeeper falls near the bell.
Tennesseans’ barricade is overwhelmed. Bull is lanced near the chapel.
Crockett runs to the chapel, a torch with him. He throws his rifle to a soldier, waves the torch at another, but a lancer stabs him against the door. He knocks the lance wood out with left hand, the lancer with his torch, enters the “magazine” & throws his torch on gunpowder barrels. The baptistry, then the whole south side of the church blow up.)

(North side of the chapel. Mexicans enter the sacristy trough a breach in the east wall.
Bowie’s in his bed. Jethro shoots a Mexican. Bowie gun-shoots six all together, then he gets two pistols and shoots again. As Mexicans are going to kill him, Jethro jumps in front and is slaughtered. Then Bowie gets his knife and cuts a Mexican’s throat before to be killed in turn by their bayonets.
Doctor Sutherland is bayoneted firing his pistol.
Lieutenant Rodriguez & soldiers stay frozen upon discovering Susannah, Lisa and Sam under a blanket.)

(Mexican colors – an eagle on the flag – float over the Alamo.
Over a hill, Smitty comes back, only to discover that the battle is over. Music : Degüello.)

(The chapel yard. Lieutenant Rodriguez looks at Lady Dickinson holding Lisa in her arms while Sam puts a blanket on a donkey’s back, as a Bexareño holds the reins. Music : Tennessee Babe, choral version.)

Tennessee babe with a sweet-soundin’ name
Dear little rose of the South
You are so sweet that the neighbors all claim…

Susannah, having put Lisa on the donkey, to the Bexareño : Muchissimas Gracias.
The man : Por nada.

…Sugar won’t melt in your mouth.

Lisa : Where’s Daddy, Mommy ?
(Susannah stars to walk aside her daughter, Sam holding the reins.)

O Lisa, sweet Lisa
Just look at the way you have grown…
(They exit the compound through what’s left of West wall. Jocko’s body is laying on the ruins.)
O Lisa, dear Lisa,
O Lisa my baby, my darling my own…

(Santa Anna is there on his white horse. Mexican Soldiers & women are standing around as they pass.)

Tennessee babe save your dimples for me
Don’t let a one get away
O Lisa my darling, ‘though you’re only three
You’ll be a grand lady some day…
(A Mexican woman signs herself.)

Santa Anna, lifting his hand : ¡ Corneta !
(Bugles call ; men raise their arms as Sue continues her walk.)

O Lisa, dear Lisa,
You’ll be a grand lady some day.

(Approaching Santa Anna, Susannah stops to give a look at him, who looks right in front of him, before she resumes her walk.)
[Music : Ballad of the Alamo :]
Let the old men tell the story, let the legend grow and grow…
(Santa Anna removes his bicorn and holds it out as Susannah passes, then looks at her going away.)
…Of the thirteen days of glory at the siege of Alamo.
(On the hill, Smitty takes off his fur cap.)
Lift the tattered banners proudly, while the eyes of Texans shine
Let the fort that was a mission be an everlasting shrine
Once they fought to give us freedom, that is all you need to know
Of the thirteen days of glory at the siege of Alamo.

(Susannah joins Smitty atop the hill, he tries to help her with her bundle & and they merge with the sky holding hands.)

[Ballad coda :]
Now the bugles are silent
And there’s rust on each sword
And the small band of soldiers
Lie asleep in the arms of the Lord…
Lie asleep in the arms of the Lord !

(Last shot of the chapel against the setting sun.)



THE END



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Re: The Script

Postby NefariousNed on Wed Oct 01, 2008 5:56 am

Thanks again, Alamo John.

"Let the old men tell the story," indeed. Who would've thought that one day, we would be those 'old men'?
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Re: The Script

Postby Alamo John UK on Wed Oct 01, 2008 9:15 am

Very true friend, very true. :(
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Re: The Script

Postby Seguin on Sun Oct 12, 2008 3:07 pm

Nefarious wrote:Thanks again, Alamo John.

"Let the old men tell the story," indeed. Who would've thought that one day, we would be those 'old men'?


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What exactly does this mean?

Postby Greg C on Fri Mar 06, 2009 1:06 pm

"I'll be below getting washed on the outside, and wet down inside."

One of the more popular lines from the film, but what exactly does it mean?
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Postby mrbassbone on Fri Mar 06, 2009 1:08 pm

Greg C wrote:"I'll be below getting washed on the outside, and wet down inside."

One of the more popular lines from the film, but what exactly does it mean?


It means that he is going to get cleaned up and drunk at the same time.
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Re: What exactly does this mean?

Postby JB BOOKS on Fri Mar 06, 2009 5:22 pm

I did that once and fell down the stairs.
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Re: What exactly does this mean?

Postby Greg C on Fri Mar 06, 2009 9:16 pm

Thanks for the clarification. :)
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Re: The Script

Postby quincey morris on Thu Mar 19, 2009 4:36 pm

Fantastic job! Ok-how many of you use lines from the film on occassion?

Let's see: it's a big one Davy; this side of Nacogdoches;wear'n out horses. That is three I can think of that slip into comments and occasional converstations.

Closed captioning-how I finnally figured out what Chill Willis was saying! :mrgreen:
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Re: The Script

Postby mrbassbone on Thu Mar 19, 2009 4:59 pm

Alright...speaking of the script. When Crockett says..."Half of you men, throw up a barricade...throw up a barricade"...he turns to Chill Wills and says WHAT to him while directing him to the wall over the gate? I want YOUR take of what he said..

quincey morris wrote:Fantastic job! Ok-how many of you use lines from the film on occassion?

Let's see: it's a big one Davy; this side of Nacogdoches;wear'n out horses. That is three I can think of that slip into comments and occasional converstations.

Closed captioning-how I finnally figured out what Chill Willis was saying! :mrgreen:
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Re: The Script

Postby Davy on Thu Mar 19, 2009 4:59 pm

quincey morris wrote:Fantastic job! Ok-how many of you use lines from the film on occassion?

Let's see: it's a big one Davy; this side of Nacogdoches;wear'n out horses. That is three I can think of that slip into comments and occasional converstations.

Closed captioning-how I finnally figured out what Chill Willis was saying! :mrgreen:


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Re: The Script

Postby quincey morris on Thu Mar 19, 2009 5:20 pm

"You fire that thing low..." meaning, I always thought, a cannon?
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Re: The Script

Postby mrbassbone on Thu Mar 19, 2009 5:49 pm

No...he turns to Wills and points to the wall over the gate saying something like..."You defend that wall". Bill C. and I have a slight disagreement as to what he actually says. Bill thinks he says..."retire that wall" or words to that effect... :)

quincey morris wrote:"You fire that thing low..." meaning, I always thought, a cannon?
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Postby quincey morris on Thu Mar 19, 2009 6:08 pm

Needless to say I think I am going to have to listen to it again! :D
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Re: The Script

Postby mrbassbone on Thu Mar 19, 2009 6:50 pm

Listen...wery carefuwwy...wascawwy wabbit.
quincey morris wrote:Needless to say I think I am going to have to listen to it again! :D
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Re: The Script

Postby quincey morris on Thu Mar 19, 2009 7:42 pm

Ok silly rabbitt... :lol:

While I am listening to what the Duke tells the Beekeeper, has anyone ever listened to the Spanish expressions being used during the battle by the Mexican soldados? :?:
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Re: The Script

Postby mrbassbone on Fri Mar 20, 2009 2:19 am

You mean like...Adelante...A la Carga?

quincey morris wrote:Ok silly rabbitt... :lol:

While I am listening to what the Duke tells the Beekeeper, has anyone ever listened to the Spanish expressions being used during the battle by the Mexican soldados? :?:
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Postby quincey morris on Fri Mar 20, 2009 6:29 am

Some of the background stuff...when they shot the two guys they blast out of the barracks they, I believe are using the Spanish for coward. Also, just before Bowie gets it, some one is saying (I think) "kill the dog."
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Re: The Script

Postby mrbassbone on Fri Mar 20, 2009 11:56 am

I will have to listen again to that. Don't recall hearing anything voicewise in the background...

quincey morris wrote:Some of the background stuff...when they shot the two guys they blast out of the barracks they, I believe are using the Spanish for coward. Also, just before Bowie gets it, some one is saying (I think) "kill the dog."
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Re: The Script

Postby RLC-GTT on Sat Mar 21, 2009 5:07 am

This kind of ambient voice is always meant to NOT be *heard* but just provide mood and naturalness, but it is always fascinating to focus on it and figure it out. I noticed in Alamo04 a voice several times yelling "Take cover, boys" in that same odd voice that the Tennessean used in Wayne's movie when he yelled "North wall!" .....and that same odd voice that Chemerka faked to yell "North wall!" in The Price of Freedom. :lol:

Sounds like we have to make another track for all our favorite background lines! And spend MORE hours listening to the soundtrack.
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Re: The Script

Postby mrbassbone on Sat Mar 21, 2009 5:28 am

WHAT!!! Ole Bill was a Fake!!!???!!?!?!?!?!?!?!


RLC-GTT wrote:This kind of ambient voice is always meant to NOT be *heard* but just provide mood and naturalness, but it is always fascinating to focus on it and figure it out. I noticed in Alamo04 a voice several times yelling "Take cover, boys" in that same odd voice that the Tennessean used in Wayne's movie when he yelled "North wall!" .....and that same odd voice that Chemerka faked to yell "North wall!" in The Price of Freedom. :lol:

Sounds like we have to make another track for all our favorite background lines! And spend MORE hours listening to the soundtrack.
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Re: The Script

Postby NefariousNed on Sun May 10, 2009 7:59 pm

I was just watching an Alamo film. The opening had the title theme playing over a very nice painting of the Alamo church. When the titled faded out, there was this scroll banner explaining what was going on in Texas in 1836 and how Santa Anna was sweeping north and how the Texans had to make a decision to fight, or submit. Next came an overview of a town showing some men riding in. Following that was a shot of a meeting inside a room in the town where other men are discussing what to do about Santa Anna. All of a sudden someone announces that General Houston has arrived. Houston enters and says that he doesn't have an army yet to fight the Mexicans and how the Alamo is the only thing stopping Santa Anna from sweeping across Texas clear to the Sabine River.

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Re: The Script

Postby zapadore on Sun May 10, 2009 8:35 pm

Good point Ned,....if only Duke could've gotten past that, "he's a great ole Irishman to drink with"....and listen to the people in the know at that time,...but then again he was only making a movie right?.....Can I have an amen from the congregation?....Brother Rich?....
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Re: The Script

Postby Seguin on Mon May 11, 2009 2:45 am

but then again he was only making a movie right?.....Can I have an amen from the congregation?


Amen! It´s just a movie made to amuse people for a couple of hours, so who cares? ;) :roll:
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Re: The Script

Postby NefariousNed on Mon May 11, 2009 4:18 am

Well, my point was that Jimmy Grant blatantly ripped off the first scenes from MAN FROM THE ALAMO for THE ALAMO. It is so obvious. As I was watching it, I just sat there with my mouth open with a sort of "Huh" expression on my face. Wait till you see it, Hans.
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Re: The Script

Postby Seguin on Mon May 11, 2009 4:48 am

Nefarious wrote:Well, my point was that Jimmy Grant blatantly ripped off the first scenes from MAN FROM THE ALAMO for THE ALAMO. It is so obvious. As I was watching it, I just sat there with my mouth open with a sort of "Huh" expression on my face. Wait till you see it, Hans.


I see! I´m looking forward to watching it and see the similarities! :o
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Re: The Script

Postby zapadore on Mon May 11, 2009 11:26 am

Nefarious wrote:Well, my point was that Jimmy Grant blatantly ripped off the first scenes from MAN FROM THE ALAMO for THE ALAMO. It is so obvious. As I was watching it, I just sat there with my mouth open with a sort of "Huh" expression on my face. Wait till you see it, Hans.


Point taken Ned,....I think the same thing also applied to Last Command!...
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Re: The Script

Postby quincey morris on Mon May 11, 2009 1:34 pm

Just curious--did the opening scene of the Grant screenplay appear in the previous drafts before Man from the Alamo, or did it appear in drafts of the screenplay afterwards?
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Re: The Script

Postby MUSTANG on Mon May 11, 2009 9:49 pm

Patrick Ford finished the preliminary script for Wayne's "Alamo" in September, 1948 while at Republic. In 1950, Wayne indicated that the script was finalized and production was to start October 1951. By then, the script had been further revised and polished by Paul Fix and James Edward Grant. "Man From the Alamo" came out in 1953. I wonder what element's of the 1950 script carried forward to Grant's final version in 1959.
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Re: The Script

Postby quincey morris on Mon May 11, 2009 11:28 pm

Thanks Mustang. This is kind of getting into a "which came first the chicken or the egg" discussion.
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Re: The Script

Postby MUSTANG on Mon May 11, 2009 11:35 pm

Exactly.
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